Snowman Lament
Avoid a forever meltdown19 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written spiritual poem you have penned about the snowman's lament leading up to trusting in the Lord. Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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This is a very well written spiritual poem you have penned about the snowman's lament leading up to trusting in the Lord. Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Shirley McLain
OK, you've earned a 10 for this one, as far as I'm concerned. I loved the rhyming and especially your comparison to Jesus and the life that can be had if we accept. Great job. Shirley
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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OK, you've earned a 10 for this one, as far as I'm concerned. I loved the rhyming and especially your comparison to Jesus and the life that can be had if we accept. Great job. Shirley
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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Thank you and God continue blessing you, Dennis
Comment from Judy Lawless
I like the easy rhythm of this poem, Denis, and the message it conveys. We do indeed need to pay attention to what we put into our life. It soon will pass away.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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I like the easy rhythm of this poem, Denis, and the message it conveys. We do indeed need to pay attention to what we put into our life. It soon will pass away.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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God bless and thank you, Dennis
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Your welcome, Denis
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' Snowman Lament " , is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a privilege to both read and review. To me this is definitely a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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' Snowman Lament " , is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a privilege to both read and review. To me this is definitely a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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Thank you! Very much appreciated!
You're very welcome!
Comment from Badger_29
I found this to be a delightful read, and a very good testimony.
I liked the facetiousness of the meltdown. Very well written. Keep writing, and keep sharing. I found the Song if Solomon quote to be quite appropriate.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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I found this to be a delightful read, and a very good testimony.
I liked the facetiousness of the meltdown. Very well written. Keep writing, and keep sharing. I found the Song if Solomon quote to be quite appropriate.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Ricky1024
I think it's so sad when the very first snowfall is over for its a sign of cleansing the Earth.
It brings so much Beauty and so much hope and so much fun for the children!
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We should never let Frosty melt he's our hero!
All the children should just run in the house and get all the ice cubes that they can find make him a nice ice bed so he stays nice and cold!
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This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022
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I think it's so sad when the very first snowfall is over for its a sign of cleansing the Earth.
It brings so much Beauty and so much hope and so much fun for the children!
...
We should never let Frosty melt he's our hero!
All the children should just run in the house and get all the ice cubes that they can find make him a nice ice bed so he stays nice and cold!
...
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022
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Thank you! A through exam by the good doctor and a good bill of health; who could ask for more? 😀
Comment from 1Dreamer
Laughed out loud for the beginning of this piece. You did a great job of then transitioning into the important life-saving message we all need to heed. Thank you for sharing this.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022
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Laughed out loud for the beginning of this piece. You did a great job of then transitioning into the important life-saving message we all need to heed. Thank you for sharing this.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022
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Thank you for your kind review and encouragement! God bless and happy new year!
Comment from royowen
Isn't that the best poetry, Solomon with God's help and access to His wisdom just wrote the best poetry ever, perhaps with God's. Help I might be similar to Solomon, that's what my desire is. Beautifully written Dennis, and some sound and heavenly advice, well done my friend, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
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Isn't that the best poetry, Solomon with God's help and access to His wisdom just wrote the best poetry ever, perhaps with God's. Help I might be similar to Solomon, that's what my desire is. Beautifully written Dennis, and some sound and heavenly advice, well done my friend, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 10-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
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Thanks dear brother catching up and will be drinking from your poetic odes to the Lord ASAP.
Blessings to you and yours in the New Year, Dennis
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You too Dennis,
Comment from SMASH52
What happens to the Snowman can happen to the natural man as well. The transition from the former to the latter was nicely done. The rhyme in the second line sounds forced.
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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
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What happens to the Snowman can happen to the natural man as well. The transition from the former to the latter was nicely done. The rhyme in the second line sounds forced.
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Comment Written 10-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
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Thank you.
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My pleasure.
