Comment from LovnPeace

Excellent

Hum, interesting and well done, I one experienced strong attraction and a connection. Pow. It was so difficult to walk away, but it was wrong. I am eternally grateful for that strength. Blessings, Barbara

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022

Thank you for this very nice review, it's very appreciated. :)

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

This is superb rhyming poetry with a love story within. The abstract is well chosen for your fine work. I see a winner here! Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally XOs

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022

Thank you for this wonderful review, it made my night. :)

Comment from AprilViolet

Exceptional

What a clever poem! I love that there is a whole story from start to finish! You definitely nailed this reading prompt! That's for sure. This is worthy of no less than six stars!

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022

Thanks so much for this wonderful review, it made my night. :)

Comment from WriterHeather

Exceptional

This is so wonderful! It reminds me of the romance books I so love to read. I think you have a really lovely sweet love story here. Thank you so much for sharing this with us!

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022

Thank you for this lovely 6 star review. :)

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Good

I enjoyed the back-room courtship of your characters. Hearing what they wanted to say but couldn't yet somehow, some way they noticed each other differently. Amen.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022

Thanks for reading and reviewing my poem.