This Moment
All we know for certain is all we have is this moment.7 total reviews
Comment from Artasylum
Well I have never tried this form and it looks so difficult ... soon. But, you did a terrific job their was not a filler word in the poem. I always hope to remember that we are in the moment. Always a goal... every achieved? yours, diana
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Well I have never tried this form and it looks so difficult ... soon. But, you did a terrific job their was not a filler word in the poem. I always hope to remember that we are in the moment. Always a goal... every achieved? yours, diana
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
Comment from jwsteele
This poem made me think.
I like the last few lines best.
But the truth is
All I have
Known is
Now.
You nailed with skill. Nice poem. One to contemplate.
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This poem made me think.
I like the last few lines best.
But the truth is
All I have
Known is
Now.
You nailed with skill. Nice poem. One to contemplate.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
Comment from Malerie
Well written Nonet poem. Your words flow well and have a message to convey. I like the lines "I thought I knew all, but the truth is well all I know is now." Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
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Well written Nonet poem. Your words flow well and have a message to convey. I like the lines "I thought I knew all, but the truth is well all I know is now." Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 10-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much for this feedback and the specifics! I appreciate this so much!
Comment from Gee
Very nicely done.
A good contest entry for the nonet.
The image works well, it complements the poem not the not the poem complementing the image. I think you'll do well in the competition.
Good Luck and thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
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Very nicely done.
A good contest entry for the nonet.
The image works well, it complements the poem not the not the poem complementing the image. I think you'll do well in the competition.
Good Luck and thanks for sharing
Comment Written 10-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much for this feedback!
Comment from Versch
This is a beautiful nonet poetry, an excellent entry for the contest. Indeed, we all learn from our past experiences as we grow older. I think our future is influenced by our past life, and we become the person we are now. Well done and good luck!
(Your sixth line has only three syllables, there should be four)
Suggestion:
-> But the truth is
All I have
You can change it by clicking on 'edit', and when you're done editing, don't forget to click 'save' right on the bottom.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
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This is a beautiful nonet poetry, an excellent entry for the contest. Indeed, we all learn from our past experiences as we grow older. I think our future is influenced by our past life, and we become the person we are now. Well done and good luck!
(Your sixth line has only three syllables, there should be four)
Suggestion:
-> But the truth is
All I have
You can change it by clicking on 'edit', and when you're done editing, don't forget to click 'save' right on the bottom.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much for this feedback and the catch on my mistake! I will go fix that now. I appreciate the feedback so much!
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You're welcome! I can see you are new, like I was about half a year ago. Welcome to FanStory. There is so much to learn on this site. Still I haven't figured out many of them. Best wishes! Ver
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The sixth line has only 3 syllables and it should have 4. All there is in life is now, we have memories of the past and the future is a mystery but if you notice the behaviour of children, all they think about is the now and we should take a leaf out of their book, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
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The sixth line has only 3 syllables and it should have 4. All there is in life is now, we have memories of the past and the future is a mystery but if you notice the behaviour of children, all they think about is the now and we should take a leaf out of their book, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
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Dolly, thank you so much I am not sure how I missed that! You saved me! Haha! I think I got it fixed correctly now. Thank you for your honest observation! Also, about your reflection, Yes! Exactly! Thank you.
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No problem, glad my review helped, thank you for your nomination too x x x
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No problem, glad my review helped, thank you for your nomination too x x x
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No problem, glad my review helped, thank you for your nomination too x x x
Comment from tfawcus
An interesting nonet that seems to be saying that what we are now and what we do now is influenced by the sum of all our yesterdays. Good luck in the contest.
The line All I've ever needs to lose a syllable, but you have time to fix that.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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An interesting nonet that seems to be saying that what we are now and what we do now is influenced by the sum of all our yesterdays. Good luck in the contest.
The line All I've ever needs to lose a syllable, but you have time to fix that.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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Thank you SO MUCH for the catch in the syllables! I somehow initially missed "ever" as being two! That was so kind and I?m very grateful for both the feedback and suggestion!
