Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

This is a very well written and wonderfully descriptive poem about the lovely moon. I'm also a fan of wolves, I find them fascinating and the picture you chose is perfect. Best of luck in the contest. :)

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 Comment Written 08-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022

Thank you so much for a great review on my poem. I've never seen a wolf in the wild although I'm told they roam in my neighborhood. I am anxious to see one.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Yes we give names to moons, but the very functional wolf seem to have a reputation of howling at the yellow orb. This is a very skilfully scribed post, an excellent rondeau in every detail, written in pentameter and the orthodox two type rhyming and articulate and a focussed theme, beautifully written, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 08-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022

Thank you so much. I've not tried a rondeau before and I found it a bit challenging. I'm glad you say I did it correctly.

reply by royowen on 08-Jan-2022

Well done