Earth's Magnificent Moon
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Wolf Moon of Winter"Poems, stories and fact about about our moon.
12 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Enjoyed your thoughtful comments about the Wolf Moon, the drama between hunter and prey, as well as, your considerations as to why they named it the Wolf Moon. Congrats on your 3rd place finish!
Suggestions!
it's fullness on the rise. (its)
I don't believe there's facts to justify. (there're)
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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Enjoyed your thoughtful comments about the Wolf Moon, the drama between hunter and prey, as well as, your considerations as to why they named it the Wolf Moon. Congrats on your 3rd place finish!
Suggestions!
it's fullness on the rise. (its)
I don't believe there's facts to justify. (there're)
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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Thank you again for reading another inactive one. I don't get as many reviews when I put something in a blind contest, but at the first of the year I was trying to four posts in poems and stories in order to be on the rating. I wish someone had pointed out my errors earlier.
Beth
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Rondeau Poetry writing prompt contest. I like the wolf theme. The imagery is fantastic. Good rondeau form.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Excellent entry for the Rondeau Poetry writing prompt contest. I like the wolf theme. The imagery is fantastic. Good rondeau form.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much for your review and comments on my Rondeau.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' Wolf Moon Winter', is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a privilege to both read and review. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022
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' Wolf Moon Winter', is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a privilege to both read and review. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
Comment Written 10-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022
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I'm so glad you liked my poem. Thank you for the review and comments.
You're very welcome.
Comment from June Sargent
Creatures of the night - whether feathered or furry - always add a touch of mystery. This is especially true on a full moon evening. Not sure if wolves howl more often in January, but they would sound more eerie and louder during the colder months, echoing across snowcovered terrain. I ejoyed this rondeau.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
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Creatures of the night - whether feathered or furry - always add a touch of mystery. This is especially true on a full moon evening. Not sure if wolves howl more often in January, but they would sound more eerie and louder during the colder months, echoing across snowcovered terrain. I ejoyed this rondeau.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
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Thank you, June. I really appreciate the review. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Gee
This is a perfectly written Rondeau.
The first I seen. You did a fantastic job!
And your image hints to the poem. Not the poem complimenting the image. The poem vividly describes night in the forest.
I think this is a winner.
Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
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This is a perfectly written Rondeau.
The first I seen. You did a fantastic job!
And your image hints to the poem. Not the poem complimenting the image. The poem vividly describes night in the forest.
I think this is a winner.
Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 10-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
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Thank you for a great review. I'm so glad you like my Rondeau.
Comment from Anne Johnston
I like your poem very much. Beautiful picture of the wolf howling at the moon and great words to describe it. God's plan for all His creatures is perfect, each one has its particular beauty.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
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I like your poem very much. Beautiful picture of the wolf howling at the moon and great words to describe it. God's plan for all His creatures is perfect, each one has its particular beauty.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
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Thank you, Anne. I'm so glad you enjoyed reading my poem.
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You are welcome
Comment from Artasylum
I love this... wolves are doing what wolves do...they are beautiful creatures and brutal as it feels when you here their cries as a pack... scary, yet I love these creatures.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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I love this... wolves are doing what wolves do...they are beautiful creatures and brutal as it feels when you here their cries as a pack... scary, yet I love these creatures.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much for your review on my poem. I'm so pleased that you liked it.
Comment from zanya
A poem that evokes a wintry atmosphere as the wolves roam 'howls of winter wolves still amplify' and 'The owl is hungry more than he is wise'- such is the night chill
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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A poem that evokes a wintry atmosphere as the wolves roam 'howls of winter wolves still amplify' and 'The owl is hungry more than he is wise'- such is the night chill
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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Thank you for your review on my poem. I appreciate your comments.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine Rondeau with good meter and end rhymes, much enjoyed.
Just one suggestion for this line as it is out of meter:
"Only the wolf would know if this applies."
suggestion:
"the lonely wolf knows how it all applies"
Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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A fine Rondeau with good meter and end rhymes, much enjoyed.
Just one suggestion for this line as it is out of meter:
"Only the wolf would know if this applies."
suggestion:
"the lonely wolf knows how it all applies"
Love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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Thank you, Dolly. I appreciate the review, nice comments and suggestion.
Comment from Ethan Vandervelden
I enjoyed the poem and think it has excellent flow! The rhyming and rhythm make it a pleasure to read. You also told a good story about the owl. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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I enjoyed the poem and think it has excellent flow! The rhyming and rhythm make it a pleasure to read. You also told a good story about the owl. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 08-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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Thank you, Ethan. I appreciate you reviewing my poem and your nice comments. I glad you liked the flow of my poem.
