The Ballad of Heaven's Hoodlum
This is the result of warfare amongst angels.5 total reviews
Comment from Patty Palmer
I sure wish I had a sixth star left to give you for this poem or lyrics. It's perfectly timed and rhymed. It flows smoothly when read aloud (which is one way I decide if I really like something). It actually sounds professional. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
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I sure wish I had a sixth star left to give you for this poem or lyrics. It's perfectly timed and rhymed. It flows smoothly when read aloud (which is one way I decide if I really like something). It actually sounds professional. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 07-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
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Your enthusiasm elevates me to far beyond six stars. Thank you for your very kind response.
Comment from Kit Nongkhlaw
Thank you so much for such a wonderful poem on angels. We all know that Lucifer tried his best to deceive us and the world but he will never win because the Lord will now allow him. Wishing you the very best in the contest, Kit.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much for such a wonderful poem on angels. We all know that Lucifer tried his best to deceive us and the world but he will never win because the Lord will now allow him. Wishing you the very best in the contest, Kit.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
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Thank you for your kind review. I wasn't sure how it would be received because there are so many views from so many directions about the topic. Thank you.
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Well, we can not win for each and every contest. The thing is that we do our best and enjoy writing, Kit
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of your work reminisces the revolt of self serving angels against the supremacy of God.
The work highlights the burgeoning subscription for alliance with Lucifer and how it earned the the ire of God, who could no longer keep them within his heavenly precinct, but had them cast down on the earth.
The work earns its texture through its effective use anecdotes reminiscent of a revolt.
Excellent work. Bravo.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
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The objective correlative of your work reminisces the revolt of self serving angels against the supremacy of God.
The work highlights the burgeoning subscription for alliance with Lucifer and how it earned the the ire of God, who could no longer keep them within his heavenly precinct, but had them cast down on the earth.
The work earns its texture through its effective use anecdotes reminiscent of a revolt.
Excellent work. Bravo.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
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Thank you for your kind review. I wasn't sure how it would be received because there are so many views from so many directions about the topic. Thank you.
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Remain Blessed.
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Remain Blessed.
Comment from moongirlwriter
OMGsh. . .such a well written story about how life is today, right here in the USA! Thank goodness, at least I will ALWAYS know. .. our Heavenly Father will always win this show. Oh my goodness, I can't believe why my head keeps thinking in rhyme!!! Thank you for this submission. . .it truly is divine. :)
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
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OMGsh. . .such a well written story about how life is today, right here in the USA! Thank goodness, at least I will ALWAYS know. .. our Heavenly Father will always win this show. Oh my goodness, I can't believe why my head keeps thinking in rhyme!!! Thank you for this submission. . .it truly is divine. :)
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
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Your excitement is my greatest compliment. Thank you for your kind response.
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My reply: silly and fun.
Comment from Sally Law
Fantastic offering of Lucifer's fall and the third of the angelic host with him. The war still rages as the Lord is returning soon, I think. I read the end of the book, and we win!
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
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Fantastic offering of Lucifer's fall and the third of the angelic host with him. The war still rages as the Lord is returning soon, I think. I read the end of the book, and we win!
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
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Thank you. Your comment means a lot to me.
