Snow drops take a peek
Haiku18 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Very nice! Love how you worked "spring" into the poem --a seasonal reference with dual meaning! Great photo as well to accompany. Clear and concise 5-7-5 Haiku. I don't know about you, but I'm ALREADY ready for spring!
Karenina
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
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Very nice! Love how you worked "spring" into the poem --a seasonal reference with dual meaning! Great photo as well to accompany. Clear and concise 5-7-5 Haiku. I don't know about you, but I'm ALREADY ready for spring!
Karenina
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much.In South India (where I live) there is hardly any winter. I read about severe winters and snowfall in US and Europe. I have never seen snow in my life.! So it is a subject of great fascination for me. But my relatives have told me that winter is no fun...So they come to India during Dec Jan .Hope you will get your spring soon.
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Well come on over (post pandemic) and visit me here in New England! You'll see more snow than you ever wanted to! I'd love it!
Karenina
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Charming whimsy--snowdrops take a peek! Clever wordplay--life "springs"--this is a lovely and elegant haiku--a fine entry for the club event! Cheers. LIZ
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Charming whimsy--snowdrops take a peek! Clever wordplay--life "springs"--this is a lovely and elegant haiku--a fine entry for the club event! Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much. AS you suggested I will take a peek into your profile now and then.
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
Very imaginatively penned. A short poem that lends itself to many interpretations. The picture and colours chosen are so eye catching.Well done! Thanks for sharing!
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Very imaginatively penned. A short poem that lends itself to many interpretations. The picture and colours chosen are so eye catching.Well done! Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
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Thank you for the encouragement and the glittering stars.
Comment from Christina D. Hissong
Very nice poem with brilliant imagery. The accompanying photo is very nice. Many of us are so excited to see the first spring flowers after a long winter. Very nicely written.
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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
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Very nice poem with brilliant imagery. The accompanying photo is very nice. Many of us are so excited to see the first spring flowers after a long winter. Very nicely written.
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Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoyed reading your Haiku club entry. I especially enjoyed the last line, 'life springs once again'. It sure does as part of God's plan. He is so awesome. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
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I enjoyed reading your Haiku club entry. I especially enjoyed the last line, 'life springs once again'. It sure does as part of God's plan. He is so awesome. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
One of the first flowers of spring and they sometimes brave the snow in order to flower and bring us all hope that spring is on its way, much enjoyed, Happy New Year to you also, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
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One of the first flowers of spring and they sometimes brave the snow in order to flower and bring us all hope that spring is on its way, much enjoyed, Happy New Year to you also, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much .
Comment from giraffmang
hi there,
I like this. The subtle personification of the snowdrop reminded me of peeking from the bed covers on a cold winter morning. It's familiar and comforting imagery. It's also a hopeful thing, which is nice in the current climate.
Good job
GMG
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
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hi there,
I like this. The subtle personification of the snowdrop reminded me of peeking from the bed covers on a cold winter morning. It's familiar and comforting imagery. It's also a hopeful thing, which is nice in the current climate.
Good job
GMG
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much .
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Mmm, snowdrops are so far away, but I do appreciate the gracious personification in your poem :"
snowdrops take a peek
to see if winter has left
life springs once again".
Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
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Mmm, snowdrops are so far away, but I do appreciate the gracious personification in your poem :"
snowdrops take a peek
to see if winter has left
life springs once again".
Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
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Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much.
