Snow drops take a peek
Haiku18 total reviews
Comment from jwsteele
snowdrops take a peek
to see if winter has left-
life springs once again
It won't be long now
It's the home stretch
So far it's been easy
Nice write!
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
  |
snowdrops take a peek
to see if winter has left-
life springs once again
It won't be long now
It's the home stretch
So far it's been easy
Nice write!
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
-
Thank you very much .sorry for the delayed reply.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent, expressive use of your seventeen syllables in this lovely, charming haiku. Yes, there are times during the year when a new season starts to emerge when the outgoing one is still pretty much in change.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
|
You have made excellent, expressive use of your seventeen syllables in this lovely, charming haiku. Yes, there are times during the year when a new season starts to emerge when the outgoing one is still pretty much in change.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
-
Thank you very much .I am sorry my reply was delayed.
Comment from Boogienights
I for one can't wait for spring. The snow drops need to make way for rain drops. Sadly, we are a couple of months off from that. Thank you so much for sharing. :)
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
|
I for one can't wait for spring. The snow drops need to make way for rain drops. Sadly, we are a couple of months off from that. Thank you so much for sharing. :)
Comment Written 08-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
-
Thank you very much.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Snow drops take a peek
by Sanku
Excellent entry for the New Beginning Haiku Club Event. I love the imagery and presentation. Good syllables count and connection between lines.
I suggest to add a dash at the end of the second line.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
|
Snow drops take a peek
by Sanku
Excellent entry for the New Beginning Haiku Club Event. I love the imagery and presentation. Good syllables count and connection between lines.
I suggest to add a dash at the end of the second line.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
-
I always forget to do that.I will do it now
thank you very much for the encouraging comments.
Comment from Malerie
Nice title and well written Haiku. Your words are very vivid, the picture you selected tells the story of the "snowdrops taking a peak." Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
|
Nice title and well written Haiku. Your words are very vivid, the picture you selected tells the story of the "snowdrops taking a peak." Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
-
Thank you very much.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation, Sanku.
-You wrote a good haiku with a good topic.
-Effective nature and seasonal imagery.
-Good description of the snowdrops
and a good satori line.
-Haiku are usually centered.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
|
-Nice image and presentation, Sanku.
-You wrote a good haiku with a good topic.
-Effective nature and seasonal imagery.
-Good description of the snowdrops
and a good satori line.
-Haiku are usually centered.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
-
Thank you very much.
-
You are welcome.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
This is a good haiku poem.
All syllables are in check and the content includes two seasons.
I did ponder the photo as I had snow in my head but presume the flowers relate to the end line of spring. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
|
This is a good haiku poem.
All syllables are in check and the content includes two seasons.
I did ponder the photo as I had snow in my head but presume the flowers relate to the end line of spring. Nicely done.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
-
Thank you very much.
Comment from Gee
OMG...You did well aligning the poem.
I didn't think it was a haiku at first.
I had to count the syllables.
I think the poem works well with the image.
Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
|
OMG...You did well aligning the poem.
I didn't think it was a haiku at first.
I had to count the syllables.
I think the poem works well with the image.
Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
-
Thank you very much
Comment from Mary Shifman
I really like this poem. A friend has been helping me move out of my home and into where I'm living now. I had a lot of flower pots with dirt still in them but no plants to be seen. He dumped out all the dirt and as I walked past I noticed sprouting Narcissus bulbs. I scrambled to pick them up and I've repotted them and they're doing nicely after their traumatic eviction. I think I'll have spring flowers sometime in February. Lovely poem.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
|
I really like this poem. A friend has been helping me move out of my home and into where I'm living now. I had a lot of flower pots with dirt still in them but no plants to be seen. He dumped out all the dirt and as I walked past I noticed sprouting Narcissus bulbs. I scrambled to pick them up and I've repotted them and they're doing nicely after their traumatic eviction. I think I'll have spring flowers sometime in February. Lovely poem.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
-
Thank you .hope you will have spring flowers soon .
Comment from lyenochka
I love it! Snowdrops are one of the very first flowers to bloom. They are a January flower but I haven't seen any peek out of the snow yet. Your final line gives us the hope for life "springing" back as these lovely flowers herald the hope of spring!
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
|
I love it! Snowdrops are one of the very first flowers to bloom. They are a January flower but I haven't seen any peek out of the snow yet. Your final line gives us the hope for life "springing" back as these lovely flowers herald the hope of spring!
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
-
Thank you very much,Helen . I think winter is severe this year. I know about snowdrops only from novels. I had lived in Delhi for about 4 years .There is severe winter there but no snow ..
