Whispered Lullabies
a 3-6-9 poem27 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Oh wow! Congratulations. Mine are 19 (in college) and 15 (high school.)
I've helped raise them all these years--such a blessing. Your 3--6--9
poem is warm and delightful.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Oh wow! Congratulations. Mine are 19 (in college) and 15 (high school.)
I've helped raise them all these years--such a blessing. Your 3--6--9
poem is warm and delightful.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Hi Janice. Thanks so much. I am still agog at the fact we have a little girl in the family... hubby and I had two sons.
Melissa
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Congratulations to your new granddaughter. Babies area such precious things. I hear that grand children are the best things that could happen to one. You inspired me to write one, too about a friend, maybe.
Well done.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Congratulations to your new granddaughter. Babies area such precious things. I hear that grand children are the best things that could happen to one. You inspired me to write one, too about a friend, maybe.
Well done.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Thank you so very much Lisa. Hugs!!!
Melissa
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
I Love this. A very sweet and beautifully written poem. It has a nice flow and rhyme scheme. Adorable photo to compliment your words. Very well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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I Love this. A very sweet and beautifully written poem. It has a nice flow and rhyme scheme. Adorable photo to compliment your words. Very well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Hello Joanne. Thank you very much!!
Melissa
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Your welcome 🙂
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Your welcome 🙂
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Whispered Lullabies
by Sugarray77
Hello, Melissa, beautiful 3/6/9 for the contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. I like the presentation and imagery.
Welcome to the grandmother club and congratulations! What a wonderful way to start the year!
Whenever 3
we soothe a baby's fears,6
warm cuddles will wash away their tears.9
Whenever3
we whisper lullabies6
with humming croons, it comforts their cries.9
Whenever3
we snuggle ~ count their toes.6
within our hearts a tenderness grows.9
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Whispered Lullabies
by Sugarray77
Hello, Melissa, beautiful 3/6/9 for the contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. I like the presentation and imagery.
Welcome to the grandmother club and congratulations! What a wonderful way to start the year!
Whenever 3
we soothe a baby's fears,6
warm cuddles will wash away their tears.9
Whenever3
we whisper lullabies6
with humming croons, it comforts their cries.9
Whenever3
we snuggle ~ count their toes.6
within our hearts a tenderness grows.9
Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much Gypsy!!
Melissa
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You're welcome :)
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Welcome to the most enjoyable group in life. You are blessed, and have put your new status to good use by writing such a delightful 3-6-9 poem. Between the repetitions of the first line, and the line-end rhymes I think you've nailed it.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Welcome to the most enjoyable group in life. You are blessed, and have put your new status to good use by writing such a delightful 3-6-9 poem. Between the repetitions of the first line, and the line-end rhymes I think you've nailed it.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Hello Kate!! Thanks so very much. I am glad you liked this... I was going for alliteration :).
Melissa
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your contest entry, Melissa. I enjoyed reading it. Congratulations on your new grand baby. Your poem is well written with great imagery and perfect sentiments. The picture pairs perfectly, too.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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You did a great job with your contest entry, Melissa. I enjoyed reading it. Congratulations on your new grand baby. Your poem is well written with great imagery and perfect sentiments. The picture pairs perfectly, too.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
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Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Hi Jan... thanks so much. So glad you enjoyed this!! I wanted to try some alliteration... it was a struggle to get it to flow. Hugs!!
Melissa
Comment from royowen
I was only talking about that this morning with my dear wife, there's nothing more appealing than the birth and first days of a new born, the excitement of unknown possibilities...wow! Beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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I was only talking about that this morning with my dear wife, there's nothing more appealing than the birth and first days of a new born, the excitement of unknown possibilities...wow! Beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much Roy :)
Melissa
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Most welcome
