Faded Glory
My True Love9 total reviews
Comment from Ritasher
I love, love, love it! To be able to express yourself in not so many words, and to create an imagery with emotion that sticks, you have a talent!
For me, this poem feels like talking to a lover who's too proud to admit that he loves, so he turns away.
Thank you for creating!
Rita
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022
  |
I love, love, love it! To be able to express yourself in not so many words, and to create an imagery with emotion that sticks, you have a talent!
For me, this poem feels like talking to a lover who's too proud to admit that he loves, so he turns away.
Thank you for creating!
Rita
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022
-
Rita! You have interpreted this poem 100 percent. That is exactly what it is about. Thank you for this review. I appreciate it
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of your work constitutes reminiscences of a protagonist vis-à-vis the latter end of his lover's beauty.
The work highlights her diminished glory; her overt wounded pride; and supreme consciousness that they were made for each bother prior to the beginning of things.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of similes, hyperboles, alliterations and metaphors.
Excellent work. Bravo.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022
 |
The objective correlative of your work constitutes reminiscences of a protagonist vis-à-vis the latter end of his lover's beauty.
The work highlights her diminished glory; her overt wounded pride; and supreme consciousness that they were made for each bother prior to the beginning of things.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of similes, hyperboles, alliterations and metaphors.
Excellent work. Bravo.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022
-
Thank you Lloyd. Always so encouraging.
-
Remain Blessed.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is often guilt in a relationship ending as we feel a failure and can't rekindle those old feelings, I have felt like that many times, you created a finely tuned emotion here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
|
There is often guilt in a relationship ending as we feel a failure and can't rekindle those old feelings, I have felt like that many times, you created a finely tuned emotion here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
-
I thank you for your positive and supportive review. Thank you Dolly
Comment from pookietoo
A nice little love poem. I wish you luck in whatever you write about. Keep smiling and best wishes to you. Hope you have a great night. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
|
A nice little love poem. I wish you luck in whatever you write about. Keep smiling and best wishes to you. Hope you have a great night. Best wishes.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
-
Thank you my friend
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Love with no boundaries, love written in the stars: "It cannot conceal
or hide your still
wounded pride you wear
and you know that you
were there you were mine
since before the beginning
of time" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
|
Love with no boundaries, love written in the stars: "It cannot conceal
or hide your still
wounded pride you wear
and you know that you
were there you were mine
since before the beginning
of time" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
-
Thank you Iza; so very nice to hear from you.
Xoxo c.g.
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
That's one of the best ways to let your King know, that'
Money...Glory & Fame does not come close to the love
that you have for him. Dope! Keep Writing
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
|
That's one of the best ways to let your King know, that'
Money...Glory & Fame does not come close to the love
that you have for him. Dope! Keep Writing
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
-
So glad to meet you. Thank you for the loving review. Yours c.g.
Comment from karenina
SInce I always think of poetry as a dance for two...the writer and the reader, it's just so fine that you've written the melody and provided us with enough "lyric" for us to interpret in our own personal way. This could be faith, it could be self-esteem, it could be one true love or many...for me, it reflected our own interpretation of who we are...who we were destined to be from conception. I can't be wrong because there ARE no wrong interpretations! (smile)--- May we all remain "splendid and free!"
Karenina
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
|
SInce I always think of poetry as a dance for two...the writer and the reader, it's just so fine that you've written the melody and provided us with enough "lyric" for us to interpret in our own personal way. This could be faith, it could be self-esteem, it could be one true love or many...for me, it reflected our own interpretation of who we are...who we were destined to be from conception. I can't be wrong because there ARE no wrong interpretations! (smile)--- May we all remain "splendid and free!"
Karenina
Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
-
That is a nice interpretation. It is about the beloved.
-
AHA! See? No wrong answer!
(smile)
K
-
I like your concept. It is so adaptable my poem to your interpretation. Thank you for your interest
-
Sure thing!
Comment from Terry Broxson
This is a wonderful poem no doubt delivered from the heart. The entire poem flows really well. The first verse has great imagery. I am not sure what the wounded pride reference is about. Maybe only you two know. The photo you chose is good, but you painted a better picture. Well, done.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
|
This is a wonderful poem no doubt delivered from the heart. The entire poem flows really well. The first verse has great imagery. I am not sure what the wounded pride reference is about. Maybe only you two know. The photo you chose is good, but you painted a better picture. Well, done.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
-
Thank you; i am so happy to receive this review. It is rewarding beyond the stars
Comment from prettybluebirds
I found this poem to be most interesting and inspiring. The kind of poem that makes one stop and think a minute about the full meaning intended. I didn't find any errors or typos either. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
|
I found this poem to be most interesting and inspiring. The kind of poem that makes one stop and think a minute about the full meaning intended. I didn't find any errors or typos either. Nicely done.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
-
Thank you; a very big compliment that my poem makes one stop and think.
