Comment from amahra

Excellent

First of all, I love the artwork you have chosen for your writing; it seems very appropriate. I love the poem for its awesome Godly message as well as its rhyme scheme. Great job!

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022

Thanks, amahra. I was lucky to stumble on that art piece.

Comment from zanya

Excellent

There's a wonderful, spiritual quality to this 3-6-9 poem reminding the reader that God still accompanies us along life's journey whatever we may have done wrong

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022

Thanks, zanya. God is usually around,

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Wonderful way of sharing the gospel story through God's point of view speaking to a seeker. Yes, all He asks is to accept His invitation and believe. Well done with your 3-6-9 poem.
Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022

Thanks, Helen. The invitation is always out there.

reply by lyenochka on 06-Jan-2022

Amen!! Keep reminding us here!

Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

This is a beautiful poem of faith, encouragement, and strength to believe.
The picture you choose is perfect showing a directional sign pointing to two choices.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes,
Mary

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022

Thanks, Mary. Yes, I thought that picture was great.

Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

This is an excellent 3-6-9 poem, with strong positive religious overtones. I particularly like the introduction of the line end rhymes that are not a requirement of the poem form, but give strength.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022

Thanks Katherine. I like to rhyme when possible.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I love this, the great impediment to knowing God, is pride, or simply stubborn refusal to believe no matter what, I know that wasn't my stance, if God was around I wanted to know, I knew I was lost, hopeless, but when He turned up, ay 41, I was wild with excitement, I don't understand the resistance, it gives meaning, but better than that, a future with God in it! Wow! Beautifully written Paul. Good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022

Thanks, Roy. It looks like God has been with you for quite a few years.

reply by royowen on 05-Jan-2022

you too, I suspect

Comment from Anne Johnston

Excellent

Great entry for the contest. Truly Jesus is the light of the world, and His invitation is extended to each and every one of us. We must make the decision to accept Him and He forgives all our sin. He will be a friend who is always there for us.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022

Thanks, Anne. Some people have trouble making that decision.

reply by Anne Johnston on 05-Jan-2022

You are welcome. Hard to believe how people face life without Jesus.

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

The author's words are hopeful, encouraging, clear and creative. I really
liked the artwork as it makes one stop and think. The poem flows and connects well. This poem has a strong message. Happy New Year!

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022

Thanks for the kind words, Maria. Happy New Year to you, also.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A faithful and rhyming 3-6-9, love the sentiments and the deeply spiritual tone of your holy advice here Paul. I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022

Thanks, Dolly. Every once in awhile I write something that doesn't get me in trouble.

reply by Dolly'sPoems on 06-Jan-2022

Ha ha ha, stick to faithful and no one will object!

Comment from Sherry Asbury

Excellent

Very nice rhyming pattern and a lovely poem also. This is a great entry for the contest and I wish you the best of luck!! Of course, I love the theme of your poem and agree totally. When I am despairing, I go to Him and ask his help. Very nice work.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022

Thanks, Sherry. Hopefully He helps you when you ask.