Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep

Excellent

A poem of faith is always pleasure to read, Paul. It is clear to see you know your way forward in this genre and your writing will give pleasure to many people of faith. I enjoyed reading this very much, Giddy

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022

Thanks, Giddy. My problem is dealing with my conscience when writing some of the other stuff that comes out of my pen.

Comment from Crystal Clear Visions

Excellent

Thanks for sharing. When we put our souls first; our material needs will be met. We should walk with God when we are doing well in life too. Peace, love, and light.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022

Thanks for the review. It is much appreciated.

Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

This a an excellent entry for the 3-6-9 poem contest.
All syllables are in check and the message clear and full of faith.
I like that it rhymes and offers reassuring advice. A finely composed write. Best of luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022

Thanks for the review. Faith is the key.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written 3-6-9 poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good and very true words. Each stanza goes along with the next one. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022

Thanks, Teri. I'm starting to get into these short ones.

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

Your 3 6 9 poem is excellent in all respects: deeply spiritual and faithful to the Scriptures. God will forgive our sins and guide our lives if we accept His Son as Savior.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022

Thanks, Janice. This is a timeless message.

Comment from juliaSjames

Excellent

This is a simply written straightforward and powerful use of the format to share your faith. Technically the poem flows well because of the integrated theme.

The title recalls what my grandson scribbled in Church to me and my husband one Sunday. He was seven and the message was "God is always with you" I've kept it in my Bible for 5 years

Thanks for sharing, Paul..
Good luck in the contest and stay safe

Blessings Julia

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022

Thanks, Julia. Grandchildren are great, aren't they.

Comment from Aspiring2Write

Exceptional

This is worth reading. The truth is so good. I thank you for writing this. Jesus is the greatest gift. Wishing you the best in the contest, and in your future writing.

Yours Truly,
Joshua Law

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022

Thanks, Josh. It was one of those poems that almost writes themselves.

reply by Aspiring2Write on 07-Jan-2022

Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

A very nice entry for the 3-6-9 poetry contest. Very simply said, "You've sinned. I'll walk with you." God never forsakes us even when we've done wrong. He is a forgiving God. Good luck with the contest! I should think you should do well.
Patty

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022

Thanks, Patty. It's a good thing that He is forgiving.

Comment from Robert Zimmerman

Excellent

Hello Paul.

Your short poem expresses some wonderful doctrinal points along with the compassion of the Lord toward believers. Well done, and good luck in the contest.

Robert

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022

Thanks, Robert. Glad you liked it.

reply by Robert Zimmerman on 06-Jan-2022

You're welcome

Comment from Aussie

Excellent

We are a group of spiritual poets getting the message out there; those who do not know Him can be brought to Him with our writing. I liked your poem, you put Jesus first in your life. K xx

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022

Thanks, Kay. Every once in awhile we have to repeat some of those messages.