Comment from 1Dreamer

Excellent

This is a very touching piece. When we are lost, it is such a comfort to know we don't walk alone. I especially loved the line "I will walk that trail of tears with you."

Very well done. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2022

Thanks, Dreamer. And we are lost most of the time.

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022

Thanks, Raul. Always look forward to your reviews.

reply by Raul1 on 11-Jan-2022

You're welcome!

Comment from Artasylum

Excellent

The straightforward simplicity of this poem is touching... and I love the phrase "I will walk that trail of tears with you." good luck in your contest and looking forward. yours, di

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022

Thanks, Di. Straightforward and simple - that's me.

Comment from The_Boy_Whodunnit

Excellent

I think this is very well thought out, and each line works well. It's a very clear message and one that almost sums up any relationship with god, or at least how it all starts.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022

Thanks for the review. It is sometimes hard for people to start that relationship.

Comment from ESOSTINE

Excellent

Your poem conveyed the message of hope and salvation in Christ using just few lines. It made quite an interesting read, especially on a Sunday like this. Well done, and thanks for sharing your inspiration. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022

Thanks for the review. Yes, Sundays are special.

Comment from Malerie

Excellent

Well written spiritual 3-6-9 poem. Your three stanza flow well and paint a picture and a thought. It's like a pray of redemption, just pray this prayer and you will be saved. Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022

Thanks, Malerie. I hope that is true.

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

This is very lovely and a true testimony of the faith that you have. I wish I felt the same, but I've never really experienced any feeling of that nature. Very nice entry, best of luck in the contest. :)

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022

Thanks for the review. Someday something will happen, and you will get the message.

Comment from Gee

Excellent

Oh I think this a great entry for the 3-6-9 contest. It has a fantastic message.

I hope you do well in the contest and thanks for sharing.
Good Luck in the contest

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022

Thanks, Gee. Always glad to share.

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

Excellent 3-6-9 spiritual poem with excellent advice. I especially liked the last lines. Accept my holy Son
then your life with me will have begun.

Well done
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022

Thanks, Janet. Happy New Year to you and family.

Comment from duchessofdrumborg

Exceptional

' A Message from God ', is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a privilege to both read and review To me this post is a six. I look forward to seeing your next piece.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022

Thanks, Duchess. You are more than kind.

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 07-Jan-2022

Thank you Paul. I very much wish you were right.
Bless you,
the Duchess