Crocus Beauty
A Brevette about a pretty flower.33 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
Well the artist whose work you have shown certainly deserves to be paid well for the beautiful art work he has created! It is a stunning image. You have summarised in three words his calling and purpose in life! Well done.
Wendy
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Well the artist whose work you have shown certainly deserves to be paid well for the beautiful art work he has created! It is a stunning image. You have summarised in three words his calling and purpose in life! Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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I appreciate your comments and agree that this artist is amazing! Thank you, sweet friend:)
Tina
Comment from lyenochka
Well, the artists who work for money might "peddle" works of beauty. But some of us never sell our works so maybe it doesn't work for all artists. Still you did a great presentation with the picture and the Brevette poem!
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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Well, the artists who work for money might "peddle" works of beauty. But some of us never sell our works so maybe it doesn't work for all artists. Still you did a great presentation with the picture and the Brevette poem!
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Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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You make me think of things didn't consider before. I went and changed the paddle word so was not to offend any artist because I marvel at what they can do! I changed the word to present, as in they present beauty.
Thank you for your help!
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Thank you for your gracious response, Tina! I guess the word "peddle" took me to St. Paul's saying we are not "peddlers of God's Word" so that's why I reacted to it.
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I'm still learning to notice details like this, so I'm glad to have details pointed out. As soon as you told me, I was like, NOOO! Why did I pick that word? It's demeaning yo artists. I was thinking piano petal sounded like peddle...
Thanks again!
Tina
Comment from Raul1
This is an interesting poem which I will give it five stars. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like your poem. Thank you for sharing!
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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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This is an interesting poem which I will give it five stars. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like your poem. Thank you for sharing!
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Comment Written 04-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Thank you, Raul!
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You're welcome!
