Crocus Beauty
A Brevette about a pretty flower.33 total reviews
Comment from Versch
I have never heard of this Brevette Poem before. Thank you for your author's notes explaining it. You have described well the subject (artists) in just two words. Well done! I would have given this a six star but I have none left. Best wishes! Ver
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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I have never heard of this Brevette Poem before. Thank you for your author's notes explaining it. You have described well the subject (artists) in just two words. Well done! I would have given this a six star but I have none left. Best wishes! Ver
Comment Written 08-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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Thanks for the great review! I appreciate the virtual 6!
Tina
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Crocus Beauty', is short, succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words this talented poet has told it as it is. I very much look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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'Crocus Beauty', is short, succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words this talented poet has told it as it is. I very much look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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Thanks, Duchess! This was a fun one!
Hugs and blessings!!
Tina
Comment from NANCY V. FORREST
An interesting form I had not met before. It is an intriguing idea to manipulate he parts of speech o make statement in so few words.A nice touch title it with the color and promise of a crocus.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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An interesting form I had not met before. It is an intriguing idea to manipulate he parts of speech o make statement in so few words.A nice touch title it with the color and promise of a crocus.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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It was new to me, but so fun to do! Thanks for the nice review!
Tina
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:-)
Comment from Paul McFarland
That is a very challenging poetic form. It is hard to find one hundred fifty words for a review. I will include my stab at it here - using your lead.
Artists
Imitate
Beauty
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
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That is a very challenging poetic form. It is hard to find one hundred fifty words for a review. I will include my stab at it here - using your lead.
Artists
Imitate
Beauty
Comment Written 07-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
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haha...clever! I like the word, imitate. Thank you for your counted thoughts!
Tina
Comment from Boogienights
How clever, I really love the way you presented your poem, it's so eye-catching! I am a fan of flowers, they add such beauty to our world. Thank you for sharing. :)
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
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How clever, I really love the way you presented your poem, it's so eye-catching! I am a fan of flowers, they add such beauty to our world. Thank you for sharing. :)
Comment Written 07-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
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Thank you for this beautiful review!
Comment from karenina
I find these super short forms such a challenge! You've focused well and selected a perfect "noun-verb-noun" trio...
Oh how I long for spring!
Karenina
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
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I find these super short forms such a challenge! You've focused well and selected a perfect "noun-verb-noun" trio...
Oh how I long for spring!
Karenina
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
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Thank you, Karenina. It was tough, but very fun.
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I bet! You have to be so disciplined!
(Which is why I would fail miserably....)
Smile...........
Comment from Teri7
Tina, This is a very well written Brevette poem you have penned about the beautiful flower. You used very good descriptive words and lovely imagery. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
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Tina, This is a very well written Brevette poem you have penned about the beautiful flower. You used very good descriptive words and lovely imagery. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
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Thank you, Teri for reading and reviewing. It means a lot. Hope you're doing well, staying healthy.
Love ya!
Tina
Comment from Janice Canerdy
For me, really short forms--the lune, the 2-4-2, and the brevette--are challenging, so demanding. Yours is really good--done according to the rules, meaningful, and expressive.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
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For me, really short forms--the lune, the 2-4-2, and the brevette--are challenging, so demanding. Yours is really good--done according to the rules, meaningful, and expressive.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
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Janice, thanks for reading. I am glad you liked it:)
Tina
Comment from juliaSjames
I like the short forms but they are tricky to write. One has to focus when words or syllables are limited. It's a form of mindfulness..
Your choice of verb is intriguing.. present instead of the more usual portray. Quite profound really because it implies that artists are making a gift of their art to the viewer. It's an exchange.
In a way it's a tribute to the artists on FanArtReview who allow us writers to use their beautiful work.
Thanks for sharing your talent in this brevette poem
Happy New Year Tina
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
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I like the short forms but they are tricky to write. One has to focus when words or syllables are limited. It's a form of mindfulness..
Your choice of verb is intriguing.. present instead of the more usual portray. Quite profound really because it implies that artists are making a gift of their art to the viewer. It's an exchange.
In a way it's a tribute to the artists on FanArtReview who allow us writers to use their beautiful work.
Thanks for sharing your talent in this brevette poem
Happy New Year Tina
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
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Julia...exactly! I thought of many words but I really do feel like being able to utilize FanArt talent is a present. Thanks for noticing! I have no more nominations to give out but I will remember this review:)
Tina
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You're welcome! Have a wonderful day
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
Now, that's a very creative way of introductory. For,
to be able to say a thousand words, within a Brevette
takes amazing skill, And you have just that. Stay
Connected. And hope to see you stop by my spot,
to enjoy some of my poetry.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
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Now, that's a very creative way of introductory. For,
to be able to say a thousand words, within a Brevette
takes amazing skill, And you have just that. Stay
Connected. And hope to see you stop by my spot,
to enjoy some of my poetry.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
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Thanks for the review and I will stop by to read your poetry :-)
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Thanks for the review and I will stop by to read your poetry :-)
