Broken Vows
Broken promises4 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is left open for the reader to project the setting and plot and the characterizations. They will fill in the blanks with their own experience. Was it a death from a disaster? Was it her leaving? Him leaving? Or something else?
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
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This is left open for the reader to project the setting and plot and the characterizations. They will fill in the blanks with their own experience. Was it a death from a disaster? Was it her leaving? Him leaving? Or something else?
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
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Leave the reader wondering and wanting to know more.
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Great approach
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
Bravo!!! This is A dope Haiku! For, it has all types
of substance. For, many people would view and assess
the marriage based on how much the wedding band cost.
And this should be more important than the vows, that makes
both parties One. Great job. Keep Writing. And hope to see you stop
by, and enjoy some of my poetry. Stay Connected
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Bravo!!! This is A dope Haiku! For, it has all types
of substance. For, many people would view and assess
the marriage based on how much the wedding band cost.
And this should be more important than the vows, that makes
both parties One. Great job. Keep Writing. And hope to see you stop
by, and enjoy some of my poetry. Stay Connected
Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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I am so glad you enjoyed the piece. I will be sure to check out your work.
Comment from Theodore McDowell
A great poem for the contest and a unique way of presenting the effects of broken relationships. I read your note and I also tend to gravitate toward the darker side of life. I will fan you to follow you, and if you desire, you could also follow me since we tend to have the same bent.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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A great poem for the contest and a unique way of presenting the effects of broken relationships. I read your note and I also tend to gravitate toward the darker side of life. I will fan you to follow you, and if you desire, you could also follow me since we tend to have the same bent.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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I am honored you like the piece. Thank you so much.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
It's funny how we see our lives rapped around a symbol - the wedding ring and the peromise of a love story that will never end. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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It's funny how we see our lives rapped around a symbol - the wedding ring and the peromise of a love story that will never end. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Thank you.