Hitchhiker
5-7-5 poem for the contest4 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I love these elegant birds, they always look regal wandering in the water. A wellwritten three line poem June, and your ending line,
Cattails wave goodnight - is a beauty. Made me smile, cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
I love these elegant birds, they always look regal wandering in the water. A wellwritten three line poem June, and your ending line,
Cattails wave goodnight - is a beauty. Made me smile, cheers,
valda
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
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I think all birds are so graceful and elegant - they flow with the wind and enjoy the moment. I often wish I could just take wing and fly away...I'm glad you liked this short one.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello June!
I'm smiling as I write = such a lovely 5/7/5 poetic offering. In my mind's eye, I can visualize both the white heron and the cattails. Beautiful imagery.
Thank you for sharing!
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
Hello June!
I'm smiling as I write = such a lovely 5/7/5 poetic offering. In my mind's eye, I can visualize both the white heron and the cattails. Beautiful imagery.
Thank you for sharing!
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 04-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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So glad you enjoyed this one. I know you have a special fondness for nature. Thanks for sharing your thoughts!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Those herons are marvellous birds and you captured a moment here as they gracefully fly like huge cranes blotting the sun in the sky, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
Those herons are marvellous birds and you captured a moment here as they gracefully fly like huge cranes blotting the sun in the sky, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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Thank you! I think herons are such graceful birds soaring across the marshlands. I remember those lovely poems you wrote about many of our feathered friends.
Comment from royowen
I didn't know what a a cattail was, but I did know what a bulrush is, a beautifully written three line poem in this contest June. And excellent post, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
I didn't know what a a cattail was, but I did know what a bulrush is, a beautifully written three line poem in this contest June. And excellent post, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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I learned something today - bulrush is another name for the cattail plant! Thank you for reading and sharing that tidbit!
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I thought so, ?wind in the willows?