Mother Earth in Winter
Winter has such unique beauty12 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Joanne,
Yes, this pristine artwork soes the beauty of Winter before humans and animals interfere with it. Good use of metaphor and personification.
Congrats on plaing third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay heatlhy
Joan
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Joanne,
Yes, this pristine artwork soes the beauty of Winter before humans and animals interfere with it. Good use of metaphor and personification.
Congrats on plaing third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay heatlhy
Joan
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much Joan 🙂
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No problem, Joan
Comment from PoemsOfDD
This is a great entry for the 5-7-5 poetry contest.
All syllables are in check and the scene created is one of a winter wonderland wearing a coat of snow. Just lovely!
Thank you for sharing and best of luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
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This is a great entry for the 5-7-5 poetry contest.
All syllables are in check and the scene created is one of a winter wonderland wearing a coat of snow. Just lovely!
Thank you for sharing and best of luck in the competition.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
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Thank you
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Joanne, in 17 syllables you have created a beautiful winter image.
I especially liked:
dressed in her finest white coat
(Yes, indeed)
Beautiful artwork choice. I love when the snow glows with a blue tint.
As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Hello Joanne, in 17 syllables you have created a beautiful winter image.
I especially liked:
dressed in her finest white coat
(Yes, indeed)
Beautiful artwork choice. I love when the snow glows with a blue tint.
As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Thank you 🙂
Comment from Anne Johnston
This is a great entry for the contest. There certainly is beauty in the snow covered earth. You have chosen a beautiful picture to illustrate your words. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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This is a great entry for the contest. There certainly is beauty in the snow covered earth. You have chosen a beautiful picture to illustrate your words. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Thank you
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You are welcome, Joanne
Comment from Gee
Very nice 5-7-5 for the contest Entery. The picture is perfect with the poem.
Thanks for sharing and I hope you do well in the competition.
Good Luck
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Very nice 5-7-5 for the contest Entery. The picture is perfect with the poem.
Thanks for sharing and I hope you do well in the competition.
Good Luck
Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love the sparkle in this poem, the scene shimmers and I love the middle line. I reckon this could be a winner for the contest Joanne, you painted a fine picture here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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I love the sparkle in this poem, the scene shimmers and I love the middle line. I reckon this could be a winner for the contest Joanne, you painted a fine picture here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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Thank you Dolly 🙂
Comment from Tina Crute
This is pretty in picture and in word. The personification of Mother Earth wearing a white coat is dreamy! Shimmer is such a perfect word to use here. The whole presentation is memorable! Good entry for the contest! Good luck!
Tina
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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This is pretty in picture and in word. The personification of Mother Earth wearing a white coat is dreamy! Shimmer is such a perfect word to use here. The whole presentation is memorable! Good entry for the contest! Good luck!
Tina
Comment Written 04-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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Thankyou 🙂
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You are welcome!
Comment from June Sargent
Although I don't much like the cold, I do love the serenity and beauty of a snowy landscape. The word shimmering is perfect for a satiny white coat. Lovely imagery.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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Although I don't much like the cold, I do love the serenity and beauty of a snowy landscape. The word shimmering is perfect for a satiny white coat. Lovely imagery.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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Thankyou 🙂
Comment from royowen
Although it doesn't snow where I live, I did spend a 6 week stint in New York visiting our elder daughter and family in New York in 2010 and we saw the white hillocks on the side of the road, and went tobogganing in Central Park. Well done, Joanne, good luck, and great writing, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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Although it doesn't snow where I live, I did spend a 6 week stint in New York visiting our elder daughter and family in New York in 2010 and we saw the white hillocks on the side of the road, and went tobogganing in Central Park. Well done, Joanne, good luck, and great writing, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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Thank you Roy 🙂
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Most welcome
Comment from Mark D. R.
Joanne,
Perfect setup in words and verse to describe this wintry scene. She really is a beautiful mistress to appreciate in her white outfit.
While it is not quite a Haiku, methinks your middle line could add some punctuation mark to set off your final line.
Mark
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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Joanne,
Perfect setup in words and verse to describe this wintry scene. She really is a beautiful mistress to appreciate in her white outfit.
While it is not quite a Haiku, methinks your middle line could add some punctuation mark to set off your final line.
Mark
Comment Written 04-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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Thanks Mark 🙂
