Winter Performance
a 5-7-5 about winter13 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Perfect 5-7-5 for this photo! I guess every season has a melody to it... The idea of winter snow as whispered notes is appealing!
(I assume there is no need to shovel "notes")
Good luck in the contest!
Karenina
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
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Perfect 5-7-5 for this photo! I guess every season has a melody to it... The idea of winter snow as whispered notes is appealing!
(I assume there is no need to shovel "notes")
Good luck in the contest!
Karenina
Comment Written 07-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
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Ooh...I like that idea. Every season has a melody. Haha..no need, indeed. We just get to enjoy them! Thanks for this review that made me smile.
Tina
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Wish I'd thought of it myself! Alas, Vivaldi's "The Four Seasons" is just such a stunning work! I just YouTubed it as I'd not heard it in a long while!--K
Comment from harmony13
The first two line of this poem flow and connect well. The last line says it all! I like the theme the author chose. Snowflakes and winter do
create a warm scene by a fireplace for me! The artwork is exceptional and compliments these words well.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
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The first two line of this poem flow and connect well. The last line says it all! I like the theme the author chose. Snowflakes and winter do
create a warm scene by a fireplace for me! The artwork is exceptional and compliments these words well.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
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I appreciate this nice review Harmony!
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I appreciate this nice review Harmony!
Comment from A. Willow Bends
I play piano (not so well!), but this one jumped out at me as awesome! While winter is my least favorite season, this is beautifully done for the small boundaries of a 5-7-5. In my imagination, I can see myself sitting down to that piano and just playing to "get attention". I love this. Very creatively put together. The overall effect is stunning!
Wendy
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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I play piano (not so well!), but this one jumped out at me as awesome! While winter is my least favorite season, this is beautifully done for the small boundaries of a 5-7-5. In my imagination, I can see myself sitting down to that piano and just playing to "get attention". I love this. Very creatively put together. The overall effect is stunning!
Wendy
Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Aw, thanks Wendy. I am trying to teach myself to play piano. I can read music....very, very slowwwwlllyyy.....with eeeeeasssyyy songs, haha! Thank you for the compliments here and your kindness and friendship!
Tina
Comment from Anne Johnston
"whispered snowflake notes
winter's piece in piano
welcomes ovation"
well done on this short poem, and great picture you have chosen. I like the words: "whispered snowflakes" and that even though they are silent, they bring music to our hearts.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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"whispered snowflake notes
winter's piece in piano
welcomes ovation"
well done on this short poem, and great picture you have chosen. I like the words: "whispered snowflakes" and that even though they are silent, they bring music to our hearts.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Anne, when you read my poems, you really focus on the feeling and meaning. Thanks for doing that. It's always good to know someone pays real attention:) I appreciate you!
Tina
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You are welcome. I always try to look for the meaning of the poem.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I have only seen 'piano' used as a noun. This contest entry just educated me on a new way to use a word. Thank you. I enjoyed reading and your poem caused a beautiful image in this reviewers mind. Thank you, again. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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I have only seen 'piano' used as a noun. This contest entry just educated me on a new way to use a word. Thank you. I enjoyed reading and your poem caused a beautiful image in this reviewers mind. Thank you, again. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Thank you, Barbara. I only knew what it meant because I played clarinet in high school, lol. I am glad that you imagined beautiful things when reading this!
Tina
Comment from rhonnie69
Hello Tina: I thank you for sharing your witty ditty. I like it in that it's brief, clear, and to the point. Your poetic piece here is interestingly subtle. With only three lines and nine words you played for me winter's grand piano concerto. Again. I thank you for your entertaining endeavor. It worked well in your favor for you. God bless you, Tina. Cordially: rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Hello Tina: I thank you for sharing your witty ditty. I like it in that it's brief, clear, and to the point. Your poetic piece here is interestingly subtle. With only three lines and nine words you played for me winter's grand piano concerto. Again. I thank you for your entertaining endeavor. It worked well in your favor for you. God bless you, Tina. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Thank you, Rhonnie. Your review is as beautiful as music to the ears. I appreciate your review and friendship!
Tina
Comment from Wendy G
I like this 5-7-5 with its careful alliteration and allusion to the fact that winter can produce its own beauty as can a beautiful piece of music. Each can be worthy of its own applause. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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I like this 5-7-5 with its careful alliteration and allusion to the fact that winter can produce its own beauty as can a beautiful piece of music. Each can be worthy of its own applause. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Thank you for liking and getting this and for the good wishes!
Have a beautiful day!
Tina
Comment from Sally Law
Beautifully penned and illustrated poem in short verse 5-7-5, dear Tina. The scene makes me feel like I am missing out living in the tropics. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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Beautifully penned and illustrated poem in short verse 5-7-5, dear Tina. The scene makes me feel like I am missing out living in the tropics. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 04-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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Where do you live? You are not missing out. Snow is a pain a pretty one, but still kind of a pain, lol!
Thank you for your time and review!
Tina
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Where do you live? You are not missing out. Snow is a pain a pretty one, but still kind of a pain, lol!
Thank you for your time and review!
Tina
Comment from Gee
Sorry, I am not from a snow area.
Why do they have a piano outside in the snow?
I see this is for the 5-7-5 contest. I hope you do well.
I think the poem and visual is good.
Good luck
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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Sorry, I am not from a snow area.
Why do they have a piano outside in the snow?
I see this is for the 5-7-5 contest. I hope you do well.
I think the poem and visual is good.
Good luck
Comment Written 04-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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No clue about the piano! I wrote the poem first then chose the pic
Tina
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No clue about the piano! I wrote the poem first then chose the pic
Tina
Comment from royowen
I think it must be a sculpture, surely nobody would leave a Steinway baby grand out in the weather, you'd be tuning it all the time, a beautifully sculptured 5/7/5 entry in this contest, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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I think it must be a sculpture, surely nobody would leave a Steinway baby grand out in the weather, you'd be tuning it all the time, a beautifully sculptured 5/7/5 entry in this contest, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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I wondered about that too, Roy! You'd have to be crazy to do that.
Thank you for the nice review!
Tina
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That?s right
