Happiness
Six Word poem for the contest7 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Great selection of six words to describe the nature of happiness. Perhaps it's the element of surprise that brings out the happiness more. Congratulations on the second prize win!
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Great selection of six words to describe the nature of happiness. Perhaps it's the element of surprise that brings out the happiness more. Congratulations on the second prize win!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Yes, like waking up to find out you?ve placed second! A surprising piece of happiness. lol thanks for the positive feedback.
Comment from dragonpoet
June,
The butterfly is a perfect metaphor for alighting gently. I also think the sight of one makes people happy. Your six words is so true and it comes when most needed.
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthly
Joan
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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June,
The butterfly is a perfect metaphor for alighting gently. I also think the sight of one makes people happy. Your six words is so true and it comes when most needed.
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthly
Joan
Comment Written 28-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your supportive comments! In a world full of turmoil, we need to shift focus sometimes and just look for the beauty. And these precious moments often catch us by surprise - like waking up to find your poem placed second! lol
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You?re most kindly welcome, June. Glad I let you in on your poem?s placement.
Joan
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello June. This is a sweet and upbeat verse. I love it that you have included a lovely butterfly as your photo... what a great foil it is during these winter days to see the promise of summer life... as depicted in your art. Good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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Hello June. This is a sweet and upbeat verse. I love it that you have included a lovely butterfly as your photo... what a great foil it is during these winter days to see the promise of summer life... as depicted in your art. Good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 04-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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Thank you! It?s 15 degrees here today. So I am dreaming about summer, butterfly wings and all the joy that comes with it.
Comment from Mark D. R.
June,
Your butterfly knows a lot about life's circumstances. The poet may have a different meaning if your six-word contest entry is rearranged to:
When least expected, happiness alights gently. (-; Your version flows gently in my mind.
Terrific photo!!
Mark
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June,
Your butterfly knows a lot about life's circumstances. The poet may have a different meaning if your six-word contest entry is rearranged to:
When least expected, happiness alights gently. (-; Your version flows gently in my mind.
Terrific photo!!
Mark
Comment Written 03-Jan-2022
Comment from Malerie
The six words "Happiness alights gently when least expected" speaks volumes. The artwork/piece you selected brings your words to life. As I read and look at the picture, I can image the fell of the butterfly lightly lighting on my arm, very vivid. Good look in the contest, I think this is a solid entry.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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The six words "Happiness alights gently when least expected" speaks volumes. The artwork/piece you selected brings your words to life. As I read and look at the picture, I can image the fell of the butterfly lightly lighting on my arm, very vivid. Good look in the contest, I think this is a solid entry.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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I'm happy this short poem on happiness resonates with you. Thanks for dropping by to read and share your sentiments!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautifully worded 6 Word poem and beautifully illustrated. I love butterflies and your words were perfect and so was the imagery. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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This is a very beautifully worded 6 Word poem and beautifully illustrated. I love butterflies and your words were perfect and so was the imagery. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 03-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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I'm happy this short poem on happiness resonates with you. Thanks for dropping by to read and share your sentiments!
Comment from Crystal Clear Visions
Butterflies signify transformation. I love this poem. Things will unfold right before your eyes. That's why it's so important to surrender to the flow. Thank you for sharing; very beautiful.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Butterflies signify transformation. I love this poem. Things will unfold right before your eyes. That's why it's so important to surrender to the flow. Thank you for sharing; very beautiful.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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I'm happy this short poem on happiness resonates with you. Thanks for dropping by to read and share your sentiments!