Breakfast at Eight
Rusty, the squirrel, never misses breakfast.3 total reviews
Comment from Mary Vigasin
I just read this in the rhyming contest and I thought it was fun and truly enchanting to meet Rusty.
Well-written in rhyme and light-hearted.
Good luck in the contest.
PS. You have my vote.
Best wishes,
Happy New Year to you, Lorie and of course, Rusty.
Mary
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2022
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I just read this in the rhyming contest and I thought it was fun and truly enchanting to meet Rusty.
Well-written in rhyme and light-hearted.
Good luck in the contest.
PS. You have my vote.
Best wishes,
Happy New Year to you, Lorie and of course, Rusty.
Mary
Comment Written 02-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2022
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Mary, thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment. Happy New to you and yours. And of course, thanks for your vote.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a fun contest entry, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading it. Your image plus words pair nicely. Your rhymes work well, and the story has great imagery. I could see everything you mentioned.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2022
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This is a fun contest entry, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading it. Your image plus words pair nicely. Your rhymes work well, and the story has great imagery. I could see everything you mentioned.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 02-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much for the read and the review. Appreciate your time.
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
Congratulations to a well written rhyming poem that reminisces the recurring breakfast treat of Rusty at eight.
The work highlights the consistency of Rusty in making it to the kitchen door of the protagonist to have its breakfast at eight; and how Lorie, the wife of the protagonist felt obligated to honour its beseeching breakfast claim.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of imagery.
Excellent work. Bravo.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2022
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Congratulations to a well written rhyming poem that reminisces the recurring breakfast treat of Rusty at eight.
The work highlights the consistency of Rusty in making it to the kitchen door of the protagonist to have its breakfast at eight; and how Lorie, the wife of the protagonist felt obligated to honour its beseeching breakfast claim.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of imagery.
Excellent work. Bravo.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much for the read, review and the Bravo. Appreciate your time.
