Beneath the Blossoms
A monostich for the contest6 total reviews
Comment from Paul McFarland
A very good entry in the contest. Your poem does a good job in acknowledging the work of those who are responsible for many of the beautiful things in life.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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A very good entry in the contest. Your poem does a good job in acknowledging the work of those who are responsible for many of the beautiful things in life.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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I'm glad you enjoyed this short one that highlights the joy of discovering more than what meets the eye - in our gardens, and in our lives. Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts.
Comment from The_Boy_Whodunnit
Wonderful use of the garden and the flowers to emphasis a message for life. I often think about the green behind all the colours, one day I'd like a garden that is just green so that it is really appreciated like the flowers are. I still get excited when I find ladybugs, etc. when gardening.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Wonderful use of the garden and the flowers to emphasis a message for life. I often think about the green behind all the colours, one day I'd like a garden that is just green so that it is really appreciated like the flowers are. I still get excited when I find ladybugs, etc. when gardening.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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I'm glad you enjoyed this short one that highlights the joy of discovering more than what meets the eye - in our gardens, and in our lives. Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts.
Comment from Mark D. R.
June,
A delightful one-liner you posted for this contest. Your author notes just add to the beauty of your thought processes in composing this poem.
Mark
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2022
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June,
A delightful one-liner you posted for this contest. Your author notes just add to the beauty of your thought processes in composing this poem.
Mark
Comment Written 02-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2022
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I'm glad you enjoyed the imagery of a world beneath the blossoms of our gardens. This monostich can be interpreted on many levels. I appreciate your dropping by to share your insights.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These are deep spiritually endearing words June and so true, you captured the essence of life here in our gardens and in the foundations beneath our feet lie the roots of life, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2022
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These are deep spiritually endearing words June and so true, you captured the essence of life here in our gardens and in the foundations beneath our feet lie the roots of life, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2022
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I'm glad you enjoyed the imagery of a world beneath the blossoms of our gardens. This monostich can be interpreted on many levels. I appreciate your dropping by to share your insights.
Comment from Sugarray77
Your lovely poem makes me long to get out into my garden and explore the tiny world that surrounds my blossoms... but, instead we are looking for 2-5 inches of snow that will add even another layer on top of that microscopic level of our world. Great job and good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2022
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Your lovely poem makes me long to get out into my garden and explore the tiny world that surrounds my blossoms... but, instead we are looking for 2-5 inches of snow that will add even another layer on top of that microscopic level of our world. Great job and good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 02-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2022
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I'm glad you enjoyed the imagery of a world beneath the blossoms of our gardens. This monostich can be interpreted on many levels. I appreciate your dropping by to share your insights.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Such wise and perceptive words, June!
How I follow your advice everytime I am out and about in my gardens!
I attempt to do so among "human" gardens as well! :)
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2022
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Such wise and perceptive words, June!
How I follow your advice everytime I am out and about in my gardens!
I attempt to do so among "human" gardens as well! :)
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 02-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2022
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I'm glad you enjoyed the imagery of a world beneath the blossoms of our gardens. This monostich can be interpreted on many levels. I appreciate your dropping by to share your insights.