Twenty Tomatoes
A juicy 20 syllable poem32 total reviews
Comment from Terry Broxson
Twenty tomatoes for a twenty-syllable poem, very creative, good luck in the contest. The photo is excellent and is well matched to the poem. I do like tomatoes, and I have grown many of them. You expressed this idea in a very fun way. Good work.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Twenty tomatoes for a twenty-syllable poem, very creative, good luck in the contest. The photo is excellent and is well matched to the poem. I do like tomatoes, and I have grown many of them. You expressed this idea in a very fun way. Good work.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Thanks, Terry! I appreciate your thoughts!
Tina
Comment from Johnny-artist
Thanks Tina Crute~ for "Twenty Tomatoes" was a valuable discovery of ease and charm. I bet that the sweet juice of a tomato~ is like your personality. As where such poetic expressions are cherished~ in a room of art-some display.
(I had to do my math at another look. No biggie)
* What a cute take of an author's note~ a particular interest to share... a way to bring (all the way through) some entertainment for me.
yours,
Johnny
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Thanks Tina Crute~ for "Twenty Tomatoes" was a valuable discovery of ease and charm. I bet that the sweet juice of a tomato~ is like your personality. As where such poetic expressions are cherished~ in a room of art-some display.
(I had to do my math at another look. No biggie)
* What a cute take of an author's note~ a particular interest to share... a way to bring (all the way through) some entertainment for me.
yours,
Johnny
Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Johnny,
Thanks for your time in reviewing my poem. I appreciate your kind words and tasty review!
Tina
Comment from jake cosmos aller
very nice poem about tomatoes growing on a vine ready to be picked and eaten.I like the mood, the feeling and I like the images associated with the poem and I am a big tomato fan.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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very nice poem about tomatoes growing on a vine ready to be picked and eaten.I like the mood, the feeling and I like the images associated with the poem and I am a big tomato fan.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Jake, thank you for your time and review. I'm glad you got the fun tone of it!
Tina
Comment from Mark D. R.
Hi Tina!
Best wishes for the New Year.
You created a most ingenious and unusual text format for this contest entry. Your tomatoes are just aligned perfectly. The color and rhyme scheme also add pizazz
to your overall presentation.
Good luck in the voting.
Mark
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Hi Tina!
Best wishes for the New Year.
You created a most ingenious and unusual text format for this contest entry. Your tomatoes are just aligned perfectly. The color and rhyme scheme also add pizazz
to your overall presentation.
Good luck in the voting.
Mark
Comment Written 04-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Thank you, Mark. I had fun with this one...didn't want to be too serious. I appreciate your time and input!
Blessings,
Tina
Comment from Eternal Muse
Tomatoes are great. They say they are bad for arthritis, though (lol). Great visuals and imagery, and I just love that artwork!
Very much enjoyed, good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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Tomatoes are great. They say they are bad for arthritis, though (lol). Great visuals and imagery, and I just love that artwork!
Very much enjoyed, good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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Thanks! Yes, my hubby has arthritis and too many tomatoes and he's in trouble!
I appreciate your input!
Tina
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Thanks! Yes, my hubby has arthritis and too many tomatoes and he's in trouble!
I appreciate your input!
Tina
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Thanks! Yes, my hubby has arthritis and too many tomatoes and he's in trouble!
I appreciate your input!
Tina
Comment from Anne Johnston
I love your entry for the contest. Great picture of the tomatoes and what a cute idea to write your poem about them, one word on a line, like the tomatoes on the vine.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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I love your entry for the contest. Great picture of the tomatoes and what a cute idea to write your poem about them, one word on a line, like the tomatoes on the vine.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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Anne, I appreciate your review and positive feedback!
Tina
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You are welcome, Tina
Comment from robyn corum
Tina,
Oh, my! How silly you were! And look at those fifty years of all the amazing tomato sandwiches you missed out on - or sliced tomatoes with sausage gravy and biscuits - or, or, or... forever!
hahahaha I really liked this poem AND the unique format! Thank you!
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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Tina,
Oh, my! How silly you were! And look at those fifty years of all the amazing tomato sandwiches you missed out on - or sliced tomatoes with sausage gravy and biscuits - or, or, or... forever!
hahahaha I really liked this poem AND the unique format! Thank you!
Comment Written 04-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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Thank YOU. Glad you enjoyed it! It's good to be silly sometimes!
I appreciate your work and your reviews both!
Tina
Comment from Patty Palmer
I love tomatoes! But even if I didn't I'd like them anyway because just look at that picture! They are beautiful! You can almost taste the juice running down your chin as you pick one off the vine and bite in. My dad always had a large garden in the backyard. Half of it was tomatoes. We kept a set of salt and pepper shakers on a tree stump and would pick a tomato and eat it like an apple. Nice poem!
Patty
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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I love tomatoes! But even if I didn't I'd like them anyway because just look at that picture! They are beautiful! You can almost taste the juice running down your chin as you pick one off the vine and bite in. My dad always had a large garden in the backyard. Half of it was tomatoes. We kept a set of salt and pepper shakers on a tree stump and would pick a tomato and eat it like an apple. Nice poem!
Patty
Comment Written 04-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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That is a beautiful memory! You should write about it! I can just see those shakers on a stump by the garden. What a warm feeling your story gives! Thank you for reviewing my poem. I do not expect to win anything. I use contests mostly to give myself deadlines and direction. Thank you so much Patty!(My sweet sister's name is Pattie, so I like your name!)
Comment from Sherry Asbury
Clever ditty, but all that math got me. Beyond one, two, give me something to chew, I am lost! These are my favorite tomatoes and just bought some tonight. Just a mouthful of dainty wonder!! Love this and I have been a lifelong tomato devourer!
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Clever ditty, but all that math got me. Beyond one, two, give me something to chew, I am lost! These are my favorite tomatoes and just bought some tonight. Just a mouthful of dainty wonder!! Love this and I have been a lifelong tomato devourer!
Comment Written 03-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Not a math lover, huh? That's okay! Thanks for reviewing!
Tina
Comment from Teri7
Tina, This is a very neat and very good 20 syllable poem about those juicy red tomatoes. I don't like them all the time, but on salads and sometimes on a sandwich they are good. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Tina, This is a very neat and very good 20 syllable poem about those juicy red tomatoes. I don't like them all the time, but on salads and sometimes on a sandwich they are good. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 03-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Thank you, sweet Teri! Much love and blessings to you!
Tina
