Discernment
Free style poem/human suffering2 total reviews
Comment from Paul McFarland
Not too bad. The first part of the poem is a really good introduction to the coup de grace in the last three lines. You have some great observations in this poem.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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Not too bad. The first part of the poem is a really good introduction to the coup de grace in the last three lines. You have some great observations in this poem.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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Great reveiw zanya
Comment from Eunice Amero
Yes this is good. You did a good job. Thanks for sharing. When trouble meets us eye to eye we search for a way out and when we cant we complain. Good luck and keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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Yes this is good. You did a good job. Thanks for sharing. When trouble meets us eye to eye we search for a way out and when we cant we complain. Good luck and keep up the good work.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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Thanks for reviwing zanya
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You are very weluome
