Mahnia
Tell a Story in 12 Words; Mahnia died today35 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written 12 word story you have penned about Mahnia. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery. Best wishes in the contest. blessings, Teri
This is a very well written 12 word story you have penned about Mahnia. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery. Best wishes in the contest. blessings, Teri
Comment Written 07-Jan-2022
Comment from Anne Johnston
Very well written for this contest. Your twelve short words tell a sad story.
Such a little insect, yet it can cause severe illness, and death. I hope you do well in the contest.
Very well written for this contest. Your twelve short words tell a sad story.
Such a little insect, yet it can cause severe illness, and death. I hope you do well in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2022
Comment from Annmuma
You met every contest rule and have a very good entry here. It tells the story succinctly and clearly. No spag. Not one extra word. I like it and wish you well in the contest. ann
You met every contest rule and have a very good entry here. It tells the story succinctly and clearly. No spag. Not one extra word. I like it and wish you well in the contest. ann
Comment Written 04-Jan-2022
Comment from dmt1967
Considering the word count you have written a very balanced story. It has a beginning, middle, and end which makes up the template and is very well written. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing. Hay New Year.
Considering the word count you have written a very balanced story. It has a beginning, middle, and end which makes up the template and is very well written. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing. Hay New Year.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2022
Comment from cat frenette
It's very difficult to tell a story in just 12 words, and you've done exactly that. Poor Mahnia! And the photo you selected is the perfect visual for your story. Best of luck in the contest!
It's very difficult to tell a story in just 12 words, and you've done exactly that. Poor Mahnia! And the photo you selected is the perfect visual for your story. Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 03-Jan-2022
Comment from Judy Lawless
I'm impressed at how well you told a major story in less than twelve words. Emotions are ours to feel, without being told how others are affected. Great job. Good luck in the contest.
I'm impressed at how well you told a major story in less than twelve words. Emotions are ours to feel, without being told how others are affected. Great job. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2022
Comment from Iza Deleanu
One bite that ended a fragile life, but open a door to something unknown. As a story telling technique we have the cause and effect and also the culmination point and ending. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
One bite that ended a fragile life, but open a door to something unknown. As a story telling technique we have the cause and effect and also the culmination point and ending. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2022
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Malaria is a horrible disease; a mosquito-borne parasitic disease. This causes high fever, severe chills and sweating. Very rare; treatable by a medical professional; requires lab test or imaging; Can last several months; transmitted through mosquito bites; may be dangerous or life threatening.
Malaria is a horrible disease; a mosquito-borne parasitic disease. This causes high fever, severe chills and sweating. Very rare; treatable by a medical professional; requires lab test or imaging; Can last several months; transmitted through mosquito bites; may be dangerous or life threatening.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2022
Comment from Gee
I understand how hard it is to write with such few words. I think caputered the events.
I wish you well in the contest.
Hopefully you can expand this into a full story.
I understand how hard it is to write with such few words. I think caputered the events.
I wish you well in the contest.
Hopefully you can expand this into a full story.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2022
Comment from Raul1
This is a very sad story but it is well written. It is interesting. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like your story. Good luck in the contest! Nice job.
This is a very sad story but it is well written. It is interesting. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like your story. Good luck in the contest! Nice job.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2022