Comment from Annmuma

Excellent

You have met every contest requirement and the ending was perfect! I enjoyed the read and wish you luck in the contest. I found no spag and yo have my vote! ann

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022

Thank you for the great review, Ann. I really appreciate the generous stars and support. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.

Comment from LisaMay

Exceptional

What a great result for everyone!! ... and I think your story will have a great result for you - I predict a win. It is brief but nothing is lost in the way of background and drama, leading to the impact of the surprise ending.

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022

Wow, thank you, Lisa. I sure didn't plan on seeing a sixer for this ridiculous piece. I figured I'd get hate reviews from little old ladies. Lol. Thank you so much. You made my day. I hope your new years is starting off perfectly. Mine just started out pretty well. Thank you again.

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reply by LisaMay on 01-Jan-2022

I thought it was a crisply written story and I had a spare 6 - starting the year feeling generous.
I think the little old ladies would be cheering... a lot of them have to put up with grumpy old bastards and would probably love to be free themselves.

reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022

Hahaha. I'm sure.

Thank you again.

;)

Comment from Melodie Michelle

Excellent

Cute story my friend! I loved it I really enjoyed reading this piece! Perfect entry for the Surprise Me contest and best of wishes in the writing prompt;-)

Thank you for sharing and may God bless you and your family during this brand New Year!

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022

Thank you for the fantastic review, Melodie. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. I hope you have a wonderful new year as well.

reply by Melodie Michelle on 01-Jan-2022

;-)