New year thoughts
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Comment from lyenochka
I loved your poem and appreciate the good wishes in your notes. I wonder if there is a reason why sometimes the first person pronoun is capitalized and other times not. I love the peace of the poem releasing the old year with forgiveness. I wonder what the "Second Coming" means to you as to Christians, it means Christ's return.
Phrases I really enjoyed:
" fairy lights wink"
"like a yellowed autumn leaf shrugged off by the tree."
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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I loved your poem and appreciate the good wishes in your notes. I wonder if there is a reason why sometimes the first person pronoun is capitalized and other times not. I love the peace of the poem releasing the old year with forgiveness. I wonder what the "Second Coming" means to you as to Christians, it means Christ's return.
Phrases I really enjoyed:
" fairy lights wink"
"like a yellowed autumn leaf shrugged off by the tree."
Comment Written 03-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Oh! God .It is sheer carelessness.(not capitalising the first person) I noticed it and corrected it ,then I forgot to click 'save'!
W.B Yeats poem 'Second Coming' talks about the return of Christ. I wish even another Krishna could come back. The world is in such a mess that we need a saviour whoever it is.
' Thank you for dropping by.
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Don't feel bad. In all the other languages I know which have capital letters, only English capitalizes the "I" As a teen, I was rebellious and used the lowercase. 😂
Comment from Malerie
Thank you for sharing the new year thoughts. This is well written and well thought out. This piece inspires the readers and we can all learn something from reading this. Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you for sharing the new year thoughts. This is well written and well thought out. This piece inspires the readers and we can all learn something from reading this. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Boogienights
This is wonderful and expresses some great sentiments. I hope that all that you wish for comes true, this is a beautifully written poem. I really enjoyed reading it
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This is wonderful and expresses some great sentiments. I hope that all that you wish for comes true, this is a beautifully written poem. I really enjoyed reading it
Comment Written 02-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Paul McFarland
Nicely done, Sanku. This is an excellent New Years poem. I think you are starting the new year off on the right foot. I hope the new year treats you well.
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Nicely done, Sanku. This is an excellent New Years poem. I think you are starting the new year off on the right foot. I hope the new year treats you well.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much.
Comment from dragonpoet
Sanku,
This poem has some good metaphor and a path on the best way to live
in the coming year.
One error I found is strike should be strikes.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Happy New Year
Joan
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Sanku,
This poem has some good metaphor and a path on the best way to live
in the coming year.
One error I found is strike should be strikes.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Happy New Year
Joan
Comment Written 01-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Thank you for pointing that out .I have corrected it.
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You're welccome, Sanku. Glad I could help.
Joan
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
Today is the first blank page of a 365-page book. Let's focus on making 2022 the best year yet with these positive, life-affirming quotes. Your lovely poem is inspiring indeed. Thanks for sharing. Have a great year! Cheers!
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Today is the first blank page of a 365-page book. Let's focus on making 2022 the best year yet with these positive, life-affirming quotes. Your lovely poem is inspiring indeed. Thanks for sharing. Have a great year! Cheers!
Comment Written 01-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much for this encouragement..I loved the stars
Comment from Melodie Michelle
This poem is EXCELLENT and very well thought out and well written! The characters interact nicely together throughout the piece and the storyline was very interesting and held my attention;-)
I appreciate you sharing this piece with us and may God bless you and your family during this New Year!
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This poem is EXCELLENT and very well thought out and well written! The characters interact nicely together throughout the piece and the storyline was very interesting and held my attention;-)
I appreciate you sharing this piece with us and may God bless you and your family during this New Year!
Comment Written 01-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much.
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;-)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your words read well with some internal rhyme. I enjoyed reading your thoughts about the end of this year. Your words are carefully chosen about those near and dear to you. I like the color scheme and image. Also, I like the way you described the year as falling away like a yellowed leaf of autumn tree.
Respectfully, Jan
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Your words read well with some internal rhyme. I enjoyed reading your thoughts about the end of this year. Your words are carefully chosen about those near and dear to you. I like the color scheme and image. Also, I like the way you described the year as falling away like a yellowed leaf of autumn tree.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 31-Dec-2021
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Thank you very much for your encouraging words.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Glorious--fresh, elegant, graceful--a stunning example of free verse at its best--as fine as I've seen--heartfelt--vividly evocative of the occasion.
as the clock strike=>STRIKES twelve
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Glorious--fresh, elegant, graceful--a stunning example of free verse at its best--as fine as I've seen--heartfelt--vividly evocative of the occasion.
as the clock strike=>STRIKES twelve
Comment Written 31-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Thank you for your encouragement and for pointing out the grammatical error. I have made the correction.
Comment from Irish Rain
I love your inspiring words of peace and love.
May God bless you and your family, with a healthy,
Happy New Year also.
The Second Coming will be in God's time, which will
be perfect.
Blessings...
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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I love your inspiring words of peace and love.
May God bless you and your family, with a healthy,
Happy New Year also.
The Second Coming will be in God's time, which will
be perfect.
Blessings...
Comment Written 31-Dec-2021
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Thank you very much.
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God bless!!!
