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Reminisce

Coming Home

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Comment from karenina
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So nice when the holidays bring friends to our door...or back in our active memory, where we can muse on the good times once again! One quick edit in line seven I think?
"your" should be "you're."

Happy New Year!

Karenina

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2021
    Thank you k. That needs fixing. Happy New Year to you and your family my friend.
reply by karenina on 31-Dec-2021
    Easy edit. I'm the queen of typos et al!

    K
Comment from jaded831
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Your poem made me smile, it had a rhythm to it and rhyme, I was a bit confused as to who the missing friend was, then I realized that may have been intentional. The meeting may be a dream. Great job.

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2021
    No, it was a friend that came back and became more than friends. But sometimes love come true has a dreamy quality
reply by jaded831 on 30-Dec-2021
    Thanks.
Comment from sajeda6
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I really enjoyed the poem, its got nice rhyme to it.
Its nice to remember the past, lovely memories. The picture goes nicely with the poem. Its always nice to have old friends or family back to visit or stay.

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2021
    Thank you sajeda6; glad you liked it.