Beware
Do not go astray.49 total reviews
Comment from SimianSavant
What? Already? It hasn't even been a day since people made their goals! Philosophical/pragmatic question: is it better to set your expectations low and exceed them, or set them so high that they inevitably fail?
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2022
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What? Already? It hasn't even been a day since people made their goals! Philosophical/pragmatic question: is it better to set your expectations low and exceed them, or set them so high that they inevitably fail?
Comment Written 01-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2022
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I never thought of it that way, but I guess that people should reset their Christian goals every New Years Day. Some of them will be hard and some will be easy. Probably should set some of each.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That is so true, and he isn't going to find it hard to find them. There is a lot of evil in the world at the moment. This is a great, wise poem, Paul, and an excellent contest entry. Well done and good luck! :)) Sandra x
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
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That is so true, and he isn't going to find it hard to find them. There is a lot of evil in the world at the moment. This is a great, wise poem, Paul, and an excellent contest entry. Well done and good luck! :)) Sandra x
Comment Written 01-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
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Thanks, Sandra. You are right. Evil is lurking around every corner.
Comment from Sanku
I think it is not just a satan but many satans that taking over the world.Forget the lost souls ,the strong souls are are being guided by the dark forces. WE have to wait for the second coming.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
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I think it is not just a satan but many satans that taking over the world.Forget the lost souls ,the strong souls are are being guided by the dark forces. WE have to wait for the second coming.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
Man, I hope we get it straightened out before He comes.
Comment from A. Willow Bends
What a great little 20 syl poem with a fantastic choice of a pic to match! This is so creative and eye-catching, one can't help stopping to read and review it! Great job!
Wendy
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
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What a great little 20 syl poem with a fantastic choice of a pic to match! This is so creative and eye-catching, one can't help stopping to read and review it! Great job!
Wendy
Comment Written 01-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
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Thanks, Wendy. Have a Happy New Year.
Comment from jaded831
Very creative and is very appropriate in todays world. People claim to be christians yet don't act very Christlike. In my opinion they are letting their human personality through and stifling their souls.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
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Very creative and is very appropriate in todays world. People claim to be christians yet don't act very Christlike. In my opinion they are letting their human personality through and stifling their souls.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
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Thanks, Carolyn. The human personality can get us trouble. That's for sure.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
all syllables present and correct. it's an interesting perspective. I'd have thought, though, that Satan was more interested in involved in the deviation form those goals rather than simply rounding backsliders up.
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
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Hi there,
all syllables present and correct. it's an interesting perspective. I'd have thought, though, that Satan was more interested in involved in the deviation form those goals rather than simply rounding backsliders up.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 01-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
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Thanks, GMG. It's probably easier and more productive to round up the backsliders.
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LOL, that's true
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Paul, a well advised warning crafted within twenty syllables for the contest. Congratulations for the ALL TIME BEST status for this one. Hope you have a great holiday.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2021
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Paul, a well advised warning crafted within twenty syllables for the contest. Congratulations for the ALL TIME BEST status for this one. Hope you have a great holiday.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2021
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Thanks for the review and kind words. Happy New Year.
Comment from RGstar
Potent and to the point. A little verse with a big meaning, satirical or relevant...a thin line.
Well done.
God luck with this.
My very best wishes.
Happy New Year.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2021
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Potent and to the point. A little verse with a big meaning, satirical or relevant...a thin line.
Well done.
God luck with this.
My very best wishes.
Happy New Year.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2021
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Thanks for the review. I appreciate it.
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Excellent poem my friend and so very true! The words flowed nicely throughout the piece and didn't seem forced;-)
Thank you for sharing and may God bless you and your family this New Years ahead!
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2021
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Excellent poem my friend and so very true! The words flowed nicely throughout the piece and didn't seem forced;-)
Thank you for sharing and may God bless you and your family this New Years ahead!
Comment Written 30-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2021
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Thanks, Melodie. Satan is looking for lost souls today.
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;-)
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are thought provoking, descriptive, creative and
have a message. The words and title gives a great message! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is perfect and goes well with these
words. Happy New Year!....Maria
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2021
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The author's words are thought provoking, descriptive, creative and
have a message. The words and title gives a great message! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is perfect and goes well with these
words. Happy New Year!....Maria
Comment Written 30-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2021
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Thanks, Maria. Happy New Year to you, too.
