Comment from Barry Penfold

Excellent

A lovely story. I can imagine this being so true across the world. It allows many of our older generation to live again. How much would have this meant to the grandchildren.? Heaps . Well done.

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022

Thank you Barry, for a wonderful review. I hope it is happening everywhere, although this particular story is fiction. My mother (nearly 93) is very slowly starting to learn to use an iPad having rejected "new-fangled technology" for the last 20 years. I would love to see her become like "Grandpa" and adopt it more widely as she lives more than 1000 kilometres from me.
Wendy

reply by Barry Penfold on 01-Jan-2022

Wendy,
No problems and I do hope your mother does get used to it. The tyranny of distance can be reduced by technology. You take care and have a wonderful New Year.

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

This is a lovely generational family story Wendy, and it really shows that we are never too old to learn. I loved the ending- the links ina chain of love. Congrats on the contest win. Cheers
Wendy

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022

Thank you very much for your lovely and encouraging review, and for the congratulations. All are appreciated. I am so glad you enjoyed it.
Wendy

Comment from Carol Hillebrenner

Exceptional

This is a seriously wonderful story. No wonder you won the prize in the contest. If you have a magazine or online magazine about family times in Australia, you might want to submit this for publication after reading all their rules. It's also seriously fun to get a pay check and see your work in print. Best of luck with this and have a blessed new year.

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022

Hi Carol, Wow thank you so much for your super review, which encouraged me SO much! I had never thought about it being published elsewhere. Maybe I should look into it. I appreciate the honour of the Exceptional rating as well as the six stars also. Greatly valued, lovely review! Wishing you a very happy and blessed New Year too.
Wendy

Comment from Mary Shifman

Excellent

I enjoyed this story about Grandpa and his iPad. I know how he felt. I had an iPad when I was working and since I didn't have internet at home at the time, I couldn't practice at home. There was bo time at school either, so I just used my laptop. I guess you can do a lot with them.

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2021

Thank you so much Mary, for reviewing. I appreciate it. Yes, practice is the key to gaining confidence with it all. Wishing you a happy and safe New Year.
Wendy

Comment from LJbutterfly

Excellent

Congratulations on winning the Family Fiction Story contest. This is a delightful story and tribute to the capabilities of senior adults. You should never stop learning. I need a friend like Grandpa had to give me a few digital lessons. This story is heartwarming and uplifting.

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2021

Thank you so much I greatly appreciate your review, and I am so glad you enjoyed the story.
Wendy

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

Such a surprising story. An I-pad can do many things just like a smartphone. Technoloy is a means of creating fun unless they go on the blink, which can happen often.

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2021

Thank you so much for reviewing. I greatly appreciate your time and comments.
Wendy

Comment from Melodie Michelle

Excellent

Excellent entry for the Family Story Fiction contest and best of wishes in the contest! The storyline was captivating and held my attention throughout the piece;-)

Thank you for sharing this well thought out piece and may God bless you and your family this New Years ahead!

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2021

Thank you so much Melodie. I appreciate very much your lovely comments and good wishes. Sending good wishes your way too for New Year and a happy and safe year ahead.
Wendy

reply by Melodie Michelle on 30-Dec-2021

;-)

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

Charming story. Heads-up--as to no writing on the pic--grandpa is "writing"--I'm being facetious (let's hope the committee doesn't toss you out on a twisted technicality! Wonderful piece.

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2021

Thanks so much for your review. Lol. I am hoping that one day my mother may become like "Grandpa", as she's more than 1000 km away from me.
(Maybe he's doing a painting by numbers or a sudoku, or looking at an image! I was very careful. I wasn't going to enter any more of those contests, but then I thought that that was tantamount to being harassed, so changed my mind.)
Glad you enjoyed it.
Wendy

Comment from Annmuma

Excellent

What a wonderful story and so topical for today's times. I often find myself as one of those 'baffled' seniors faced with the many technological advances! You have an excellent contest entry and my vote. good luck.

ann

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2021

Thank you very much Ann for your lovely review, good wishes and wonderful encouragement! Much appreciated, as always, along with your time!
Wendy

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Excellent entry for the ~ FAMILY Story ~ Fiction ~ writing prompt contest. You followed the rules well. Nice plot and character development.

I like the story about grandpa learning new technology to stay in touch.

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2021

Thank you so much for reviewing - I always appreciate your time and thoughts, and also goodwishes.
Wendy