Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Good try, but not done according to the rules. The first 4 words have to rhyme. Please revise, and I will check back later for possible upgrade.
Respectfully, Jan
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I enjoyed your sweet poem for your wife. I like the words you chose. They are descriptive as required. You describe a very lovely woman with finesse. I hope she reads you poem. Good job with the prompt.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021

I guess I'm not a very good reader. Thanks for the heads up I will revised.
Revision:
Daring
Flaring
Caring
Sharing
My wife is a daring, flaring pearl
Thankful for my caring, sharing girl

Comment from Theodore McDowell

Excellent

Nice poem for the writing prompt. I loved the phrase: "cheerful pearl." Well done. I think both of you are very lucky. Have a great Christmas and holiday season.

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021

Thanks for the read and the feedback.