Comment from duchessofdrumborg

Excellent

' Worship ' , is short, succinct and spiritually-uplifting. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021

Thanks so much, Duchess!!! So appreciate your thoughts.

Melissa

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 26-Dec-2021

Melissa you're very welcome.

the Duchess

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Your naani is in great form, Melissa. I enjoyed reading it. The picture is perfect to pair with your well thought out words. I like the touches of alliteration and the message. This is a great Christmas poem even if that isn't what you intended.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021

Hi Jan. Thank you for your lovely remarks on the Naani. I was thinking about Christmas and I guess it showed through :)

Melissa

Comment from jaded831

Excellent

Your poem expresses warmth through the cold. Your words paint a glowing picture. Your picture adds to your presentation. Together they are the perfect pair. You should do well in the contest. Good luck.

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Dec-2021

Thank you very much!!

Comment from Paul McFarland

Excellent

This is a really good Naani. You have been very creative in your description. I usually stay away from the short stuff, but you have grabbed my attention with this poem.

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Dec-2021

Hello Paul. Thanks so much!!

Melissa

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Excellent entry for the Write a Naani ~ Winter Weather writing prompt Contest. Good Naani form. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Dec-2021

Thanks so much, Gypsy!

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

A lovely Christmas naani with such a peaceful picture. I like that in the "robes of snowy white," the Earth worships her Creator. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021

Thank you,Helen.

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Just beautiful, mystery poet, and a truly worshipful sight to experience. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021

Thank you!!

Comment from roof35

Excellent

This is an excellent entry for the Naani Winter Weather contest. Your illustration, of course, is beautiful and sets the stages for you words. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021

Thanks so much!!

reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021

Thanks so much!!

Comment from oliver818

Excellent

This is a very nice poem
With some touching and evocative imagery, I enjoyed reading it. It flows well and is nicely structured. Thanks for sharing this

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021

Thank you very much!

Comment from Melodie Michelle

Excellent

Perfect entry for the "Write a Naani ~ Winter Weather writing prompt" and best wishes in the contest;-) Your words were exemplary and flowed nicely throughout the piece! You nailed the short poem it's perfection! I can only give you 5 stars because I'm out of 6 stars or I would certainly give you a 6 star rating;-)

Thank you for sharing and many blessings to you and your family this Christmas!

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 Comment Written 24-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021

Thank you very much! I really appreciate the 'virtual' six :)

reply by Melodie Michelle on 24-Dec-2021

;-)