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Mystery was solved later in the morning.
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Comment from
Liz O'Neill
Your use of alliteration which you weave in and out of this story is striking. A lot of hard sounding consonants, b's, c's and d's are setting the mood and tone. You use metaphors adeptly. I like your tongue-in-cheek humor. Well done.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
Thank you for taking the time to read and provide feedback.
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Melodie Michelle
Excellent story my friend! The imagery is perfect for the piece add well as the characters do interact nicely together and the storyline was very captivating and held my attention throughout the piece;-)
Thank you for sharing and may God bless you and your family this Christmas;-)
Comment Written 23-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
Thank you for taking the time to read and provide feedback.
reply by Melodie Michelle on 24-Dec-2021
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