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Simple Prayer

20 syllable contest

6 total reviews 
Comment from dragonpoet
Excellent
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This is a wonderfully simple prayer that asks for all the important things in life. It shows your faith and your understanding of its teachings.
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2022

reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
    Thank you for the review and kind words. F_
reply by dragonpoet on 12-Feb-2022
    My pleasure,Fay.
    Joan
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Your art choice plus words pair perfectly. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Your words are well thought out and make a great statement about who you are. Yes, there are more pressing things than wealth.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2021

reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
    Thank you for taking the time to read and review my 20 syllable poem. Your comments are appreciated.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Excellent
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This simple prayer to God is more than a dream in a polite manner; you pray for peace in your life and you do not believe in fortune for you but you pray to prepare you for paradise; well said, well done; keep writing. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2021

reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
    Thank you for taking the time to read and review my 20 syllable poem.
Comment from lindafisher
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This poem is really on point. If we could all live our lives this way the world would be a much happier place for everyone. You have done an excellent job on bringing this challenge home. We'll done my friend. Linds

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2021

reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
    Thank you for taking the time to read and review my 20 syllable poem. Your comments are appreciated.
Comment from roof35
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This is a lovely five syllable poem for the contest. You said a lot in so few syllables and that is hard to do. Your illustration matches perfectly with your words. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2021

reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
    Thank you for taking the time to read and review my 20 syllable poem. Your comments are appreciated.
Comment from Augie Medina
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Perfect visual to complement the poem. I'm impressed how you managed to make the first and third lines appear longer than the middle line within the 20 syllable framework. That effects a nice symmetry. Above all, the prayer is a wonderful supplication asking for what is important in life.

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2021

reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
    Wow! 6 stars! Thank you for taking the time to read and review my 20 syllable poem. Your comments are appreciated.