He Donned
Humility - a poem46 total reviews
Comment from Anne Johnston
"Today is born in Bethlehem
Emmanuel the King.
Arrayed in flesh, a saviour born
so may your praises ring."
Because He came, we have life, peace, and a hope for eternity.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2021
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"Today is born in Bethlehem
Emmanuel the King.
Arrayed in flesh, a saviour born
so may your praises ring."
Because He came, we have life, peace, and a hope for eternity.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2021
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Thanks Anne, for these wonderful comments and review, blessings Roy
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You are very welcome
Comment from GE Parson
Bro. Roy,
Excellent poem exalting our Savior. (I think 'ol Slew Foot does not like your poem a I seem to press the wrong keys and/or miss a key) But we don't care what IT don't like, we going to exalt Jesus any how. Have you ever noted the wording in Isa.7:14 "A 'child' is born, a 'Son' is given. The Babe born in a manger, came to die on a cross as the world's Savior.
God bless you my Brother and He give you and your family a blessed New Year -Bro. Jerry
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2021
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Bro. Roy,
Excellent poem exalting our Savior. (I think 'ol Slew Foot does not like your poem a I seem to press the wrong keys and/or miss a key) But we don't care what IT don't like, we going to exalt Jesus any how. Have you ever noted the wording in Isa.7:14 "A 'child' is born, a 'Son' is given. The Babe born in a manger, came to die on a cross as the world's Savior.
God bless you my Brother and He give you and your family a blessed New Year -Bro. Jerry
Comment Written 27-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2021
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Thank you Jerry, for this empathetic and thoughtful review, blessings Roy
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Thank you Jerry, for this empathetic and thoughtful review, blessings Roy
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Hi Roy,
I am in awe of your talent and what a wonderful spiritual poem you have told yet again.
The words and image are a perfect match and fine reminder to us all of the true meaning of Christmas and the amazing gift God gave to man.
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Hi Roy,
I am in awe of your talent and what a wonderful spiritual poem you have told yet again.
The words and image are a perfect match and fine reminder to us all of the true meaning of Christmas and the amazing gift God gave to man.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 26-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Thanks so much Shirley, for your terrific comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from MissMerri
This is such a beautiful retelling of the Christmas story, and beyond. You emphasize the reason for the Christ child to be born, so that God's plan of salvation could be carried out, in spite of "the master of deception." Thanks for this. Other than the title needing a capital letter on "donned" it seems flawless to me. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year. MM
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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This is such a beautiful retelling of the Christmas story, and beyond. You emphasize the reason for the Christ child to be born, so that God's plan of salvation could be carried out, in spite of "the master of deception." Thanks for this. Other than the title needing a capital letter on "donned" it seems flawless to me. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year. MM
Comment Written 25-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Thanks so much Adonna, for your terrific comments and a super review, happy new year, blessings Roy
Comment from Teri7
Roy, This is a very beautiful and very well written Christmas poem! You used very good descriptive and very true words with lovely imagery. May God bless you and Elaine and your whole family! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Roy, This is a very beautiful and very well written Christmas poem! You used very good descriptive and very true words with lovely imagery. May God bless you and Elaine and your whole family! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 25-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Thanks so much Teri, for your terrific comments and a super review, happy new year, blessings Roy
Comment from Mrs. J.B
Wow! what a beautiful poem you have written here "He donned." I can resonate with it because as a Christian who has read The Bible it retells how things unfolded surrounding Jesus's birth and purpose pretty much in the same manner . "I especially love the ending where it says " the master of deception came to lay his cunning plan." "Yet only helped to serve God's will salvation came to man" which I think is one of the most powerful parts of the poem because it sums everything up that took place in the poem as it is saying that even though Satan had a plan to stop Him as a baby from saving mankind, his deceptive plot only enhanced the will of God to give us salvation through Him being the Only Savior.
In my opinion, I don't believe there's a need for revision here but there are a few minor things that I think can be changed to help your poem stand out more: 1. I see the title "He donned" in big bold letters above the picture and I see it again right at the very beginning of the lines of the poem so I don't know if you meant to list the title again to read as part of the poem but if you didn't mean to maybe removing it will be a good idea so it won't get mistaken as part of the story
2. I had to look up what the word donned meant so maybe making a small list of side notes of what it means and other words like frankincense and myrrh are may help make it easier for readers like me to be able to summarize the text of the poem completely
3: I love that the color of the words are white in the poem as it stands out in the black background but I think the font itself needs to be resized to a bigger one because it was a little hard to read.
Overall, beautiful job in explaining how Christ put on humility for mankind!
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Wow! what a beautiful poem you have written here "He donned." I can resonate with it because as a Christian who has read The Bible it retells how things unfolded surrounding Jesus's birth and purpose pretty much in the same manner . "I especially love the ending where it says " the master of deception came to lay his cunning plan." "Yet only helped to serve God's will salvation came to man" which I think is one of the most powerful parts of the poem because it sums everything up that took place in the poem as it is saying that even though Satan had a plan to stop Him as a baby from saving mankind, his deceptive plot only enhanced the will of God to give us salvation through Him being the Only Savior.
In my opinion, I don't believe there's a need for revision here but there are a few minor things that I think can be changed to help your poem stand out more: 1. I see the title "He donned" in big bold letters above the picture and I see it again right at the very beginning of the lines of the poem so I don't know if you meant to list the title again to read as part of the poem but if you didn't mean to maybe removing it will be a good idea so it won't get mistaken as part of the story
2. I had to look up what the word donned meant so maybe making a small list of side notes of what it means and other words like frankincense and myrrh are may help make it easier for readers like me to be able to summarize the text of the poem completely
3: I love that the color of the words are white in the poem as it stands out in the black background but I think the font itself needs to be resized to a bigger one because it was a little hard to read.
Overall, beautiful job in explaining how Christ put on humility for mankind!
Comment Written 25-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Thanks so much for your terrific comments and a super review, happy new year, blessings Roy
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You're welcome and a Happy New Year to you too!
Comment from Wendy G
A beautiful Christmas poem covering the span of human existence from the Fall to when he conquers death and fulfils the plan for which He humbly came - man's salvation. I very much enjoyed this one.
Wendy
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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A beautiful Christmas poem covering the span of human existence from the Fall to when he conquers death and fulfils the plan for which He humbly came - man's salvation. I very much enjoyed this one.
Wendy
Comment Written 25-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Thanks so much Wendy, for your terrific comments and a super review, happy new year, blessings Roy
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, another gorgeous and perfectly rhyming write by this inspired and inspiring poet, whose inspired Christian works and noteworthy words refresh and inspire the Christian spirit. My gratitude for sharing this Christmas poem - thank you...
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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In my opinion, another gorgeous and perfectly rhyming write by this inspired and inspiring poet, whose inspired Christian works and noteworthy words refresh and inspire the Christian spirit. My gratitude for sharing this Christmas poem - thank you...
Comment Written 25-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Thanks so much Eve, for your terrific comments and a super review, happy new year, blessings Roy
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You are so welcome, Roy, and Happy Holidays to you and yours, with my heartfelt wish for a joyful Christmas Holiday, despite our universal plight...Eve
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Bless you Eve
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May our Father bless you and yours as well, Roy, and keep you all safe...Eve
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You too Eve, emphatically yours
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Thank you, Roy...Eve
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Bless you
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Thank you, Roy...Eve
Comment from karenina
How great I read this at 12:30 AM on Christmas morning! A blessed reminder to us all that with Santa, Reindeer, Toys, Family gatherings... The true meaning-- celebrating Jesus' birth -- is paramount!
Merry Christmas to you and your family Roy!
Karenina
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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How great I read this at 12:30 AM on Christmas morning! A blessed reminder to us all that with Santa, Reindeer, Toys, Family gatherings... The true meaning-- celebrating Jesus' birth -- is paramount!
Merry Christmas to you and your family Roy!
Karenina
Comment Written 25-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Thanks so much Karen, for your terrific comments and a super review, happy new year, blessings Roy
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Be well my friend!
Karenina
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Bless you
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Roy, this poem has it all! It is skillfully-written, deeply reverent, and powerfully descriptive of the unique event that made Heaven possible for "whosoever will"! Superb
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Roy, this poem has it all! It is skillfully-written, deeply reverent, and powerfully descriptive of the unique event that made Heaven possible for "whosoever will"! Superb
Comment Written 24-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Thanks so much Janice, for your terrific comments and a super review, happy new year, blessings Roy