Looking Cool
a monostitch12 total reviews
Comment from Justin Chopin
Well done . I thought the puns you used in this piece " Snow teens" and " Cool" were crafted very carefully into your poem. Maybe they should take some time to chill out too. Great work. Have a very Happy New Year.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2021
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Well done . I thought the puns you used in this piece " Snow teens" and " Cool" were crafted very carefully into your poem. Maybe they should take some time to chill out too. Great work. Have a very Happy New Year.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2021
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Hello Justin. Thanks so much!!! I am delighted you enjoyed the humor with me :)
Melissa
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you're welcome Melissa.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
I love this. Very funny and very clever. I can see why it won first place. Well done on the monostich entry. Fantastic picture. I wish I had written this :-)
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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I love this. Very funny and very clever. I can see why it won first place. Well done on the monostich entry. Fantastic picture. I wish I had written this :-)
Comment Written 25-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Hello DD. I am so glad you shared your thoughts on this funny one. I just had to use it in a verse. LOL. Thanks so much.
Melissa
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Monostich Poetry writing prompt contest. Your poem form is well done. The presentation is lovely. . Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
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Excellent entry for the Monostich Poetry writing prompt contest. Your poem form is well done. The presentation is lovely. . Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 23-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
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Hello Gypsy. Thank you very much.
Comment from Malerie
This made me chuckle, even snowteens want to look cool, technically they are cool, well written, awesome picture that helps tell the story.Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
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This made me chuckle, even snowteens want to look cool, technically they are cool, well written, awesome picture that helps tell the story.Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
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Thanks so much!!! So glad you enjoyed it!
Comment from tempeste
Ciao Poet , you now have 3 votes.
This is a very funny entry... the tone is very close to those Snoopy strips..
Cool how you used the double meaning of the word .
Love the artwork to illustrate your poem.
Best of wishes !
Ciao!
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
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Ciao Poet , you now have 3 votes.
This is a very funny entry... the tone is very close to those Snoopy strips..
Cool how you used the double meaning of the word .
Love the artwork to illustrate your poem.
Best of wishes !
Ciao!
Comment Written 23-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
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Thanks so much, Franca!! So glad you enjoyed it!!
Comment from lyenochka
Lol! That's a funny cartoon and you added the perfect caption to go with the picture in your monostitch poem. Plus, you added word play! Hope you do well in the contest!
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
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Lol! That's a funny cartoon and you added the perfect caption to go with the picture in your monostitch poem. Plus, you added word play! Hope you do well in the contest!
Comment Written 23-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
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Thanks so much, sweet Helen! :)
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Melissa,
This so true, and funny at the same time. Well done! Teens just want to be noticed in the crowd. There are so many kids in a school, it's no small wonder they want to stand out... especially if they aren't on the basketball or hockey team. You know what I get a kick of these days... all the girls (and young women, too, I suppose, now that I think about it) wearing those jeans with the legs all ripped open. It looks so ridiculous... like bell bottom jeans look to us today. And they pay big money for these torn jeans!
The carrots in the shape of a Mohawk haircut sure makes that "Snowteen" stand out in the crowd. I wondered about your new word, "Snowteens", but then I thought ... Snowman... so, Snowwoman. It's quite genuine. I enjoyed it this morning!
Merry Christmas!
Hugs,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
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Hi Melissa,
This so true, and funny at the same time. Well done! Teens just want to be noticed in the crowd. There are so many kids in a school, it's no small wonder they want to stand out... especially if they aren't on the basketball or hockey team. You know what I get a kick of these days... all the girls (and young women, too, I suppose, now that I think about it) wearing those jeans with the legs all ripped open. It looks so ridiculous... like bell bottom jeans look to us today. And they pay big money for these torn jeans!
The carrots in the shape of a Mohawk haircut sure makes that "Snowteen" stand out in the crowd. I wondered about your new word, "Snowteens", but then I thought ... Snowman... so, Snowwoman. It's quite genuine. I enjoyed it this morning!
Merry Christmas!
Hugs,
Kimbob
Comment Written 23-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
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Thanks so much, KB. I cannot sign my name because this is in a contest. Hugs... so glad you liked it... it seemed silly to coin a new word, but, hey, it fit!! LOL
Comment from Sally Law
This is super fun in monostitch poetry and in good humor. This contest is supposed to be humorous, I think.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming vote,
Sally :))
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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This is super fun in monostitch poetry and in good humor. This contest is supposed to be humorous, I think.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming vote,
Sally :))
Comment Written 22-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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Thanks so much , Sally! :)
Comment from Artasylum
love the image it got an out loud laugh from me... Don't worry Ted... the eqiunox is almost here and will send the brat to his doom so that lo and behold you can reinvent a new kid... di
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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love the image it got an out loud laugh from me... Don't worry Ted... the eqiunox is almost here and will send the brat to his doom so that lo and behold you can reinvent a new kid... di
Comment Written 22-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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Hahaha... love your review!!! Thanks so much!
Comment from lauralumummu
This is so cute and witty. I love the photo and the words are cool as well.
I really laughed out loud if there were snow teens this would be exactly how they would be. Merry Christmas, Laura.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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This is so cute and witty. I love the photo and the words are cool as well.
I really laughed out loud if there were snow teens this would be exactly how they would be. Merry Christmas, Laura.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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Thanks so much, Laura. Merry Christmas!