Negativity
They always know better7 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Monostich Poetry writing prompt contest. Your poem form is well done. I like the twist of finding problems with solutions it's true, I've known people like that. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
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Excellent entry for the Monostich Poetry writing prompt contest. Your poem form is well done. I like the twist of finding problems with solutions it's true, I've known people like that. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
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Thanks Gypsy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These are such wise words and there is no pleasing some people as no matter how much you try and help, it falls on deaf ears, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
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These are such wise words and there is no pleasing some people as no matter how much you try and help, it falls on deaf ears, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
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Thanks Dolly
Comment from VJWild
This is good (and so true!) maybe take out the word "negative" and use that as the title... then it flows into the first line... I'm not super familiar with this structure but from the description I read... doing that might slow it to flow a little better. Love the artwork. I love sitting in front of my bookshelves so I can relate with this entire piece!
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
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This is good (and so true!) maybe take out the word "negative" and use that as the title... then it flows into the first line... I'm not super familiar with this structure but from the description I read... doing that might slow it to flow a little better. Love the artwork. I love sitting in front of my bookshelves so I can relate with this entire piece!
Comment Written 22-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
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Thank you
Comment from R R McIntyre
This is really good! Simple, yet profound, and quite accurate to boot. I think the title could be tied more to the poem itself. It's about negativity, sure, but what can the title tell us about it? The title here, while true, doesn't elevate the poem. The poem would be equally good without it. With the monstitch, the title should play a crucial role in understanding the message of the poem. It's a small thing, and I still think this is a great little piece, nice work.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
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This is really good! Simple, yet profound, and quite accurate to boot. I think the title could be tied more to the poem itself. It's about negativity, sure, but what can the title tell us about it? The title here, while true, doesn't elevate the poem. The poem would be equally good without it. With the monstitch, the title should play a crucial role in understanding the message of the poem. It's a small thing, and I still think this is a great little piece, nice work.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
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Thanks. I will rethink the title
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello Mystery Writer... Great job on the creation of this short, short verse. Your verse is relatable and easy to understand. A perfect poem for this prompt. Good luck in the contest!
Melissa
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
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Hello Mystery Writer... Great job on the creation of this short, short verse. Your verse is relatable and easy to understand. A perfect poem for this prompt. Good luck in the contest!
Melissa
Comment Written 22-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
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Many thanks Melissa
Comment from Sally Law
Yep, they sure do, and settled dust right after I do the dusting. A thought I recently entertained....
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest, mystery poet,
Sally Law :))
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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Yep, they sure do, and settled dust right after I do the dusting. A thought I recently entertained....
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest, mystery poet,
Sally Law :))
Comment Written 22-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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Thanks Sally.
Comment from thebigpoet
Ain't that the truth. Nice poem with some wisdom that we all know, but we sometimes can't seem to shake these kinds of people. The photo complements the piece well, as I'm imagining the woman as a negative person who is grinning at all the havoc she is causing (don't know if this is what you were going for).
Nice job!
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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Ain't that the truth. Nice poem with some wisdom that we all know, but we sometimes can't seem to shake these kinds of people. The photo complements the piece well, as I'm imagining the woman as a negative person who is grinning at all the havoc she is causing (don't know if this is what you were going for).
Nice job!
Comment Written 22-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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Yes I was. Thanks for reviewing.