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Comment from Constance Mae
Doctor Rickey, that is my brothers nick name, so I feel warm about you already. I have to say I was a tad confessed on a few parts, so I threw in a few ideas.. don't be mad. Line 4 (1st poem) Snow's kind of random, confused and scattered, the truth be told it doesn't matter.... Line 2-4 (2nd) has awaited...Ahh but Santa he must end this year...Line 9 as not and....Santa, can the naughty ones just catch a break? ....Santa's resting and can not come....the kids are excited, my checkbook is shaken, as the Christmas tree smiles...let's just say...it's all going to be OK.. I hope you are not offended. keep writing I love your thoughts...
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Doctor Rickey, that is my brothers nick name, so I feel warm about you already. I have to say I was a tad confessed on a few parts, so I threw in a few ideas.. don't be mad. Line 4 (1st poem) Snow's kind of random, confused and scattered, the truth be told it doesn't matter.... Line 2-4 (2nd) has awaited...Ahh but Santa he must end this year...Line 9 as not and....Santa, can the naughty ones just catch a break? ....Santa's resting and can not come....the kids are excited, my checkbook is shaken, as the Christmas tree smiles...let's just say...it's all going to be OK.. I hope you are not offended. keep writing I love your thoughts...
Comment Written 26-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Hi
Thanks for your comments and that's what makes each writer individual and unique!
Keep writing.
Doctor Ricky 1024
"Still Preaching the Choir Here at Fanstory"
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I just got into this and I so wish I had more time to sit down with it. I'm trying to make member bucks to get to the contests. I love this stuff its up my alley.
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Life does suck sometimes, even for me...lolo but we have to keep pushing forward and looking for ways to do greater things. God is the one who gives me the courage to keep pushing, but sometimes I just say no....then sits down next to me and says ok, break time. Then we get up and try again.
Be Blessed...
Miss Constance Mae
Comment from Jessica Kirby
Some focus would be nice. Unable to follow the lengthy, disjointed rambling for long. Not sure what, if anything, this author is trying to communicate.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Some focus would be nice. Unable to follow the lengthy, disjointed rambling for long. Not sure what, if anything, this author is trying to communicate.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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I find this here from New authors that aren't interested in learning on the site from the more sophisticated.
You shouldn't even review it if you're not going to stick with it that's a slap in the face to anybody here on fan story.
You do have the right to give it any review you like and I also have the right to disagree and block of course
This was a three-part piece basically about the terrible cold winter they were predicting by the Farmer's Almanac here in New Jersey.
If you had read through it and read the address no she would realize it and then you would have probably given it the Normal reviews that it deserved.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
"Still Preaching the Choir Here at Fanstory"