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Basketball Dreams

So Real

5 total reviews 
Comment from Gee
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Cute poem ma'am.
Nice dream you had. But maybe you did play basketball that well.

I'm glad you shared it with us.
I hope to see more of your work
Thanks
Gee

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2022

reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
    Thank you Gee. It was my game lol
Comment from Saria/Shreyamsi
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You paint a beautiful scene with your words! Dreams at times seem eerily true but that's not the case here. Your poem flowed smoothly and the words are well chosen.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2022

reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022
    Thank you kindly
Comment from The Mom/DarleneThomson
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Dear Carlos' girl,
I read your poem with immense pleasure. Your poem flowed consistently. Your words were descriptive and creative. Your rhyme scheme was perfect. Great job.
Blessings,
Darlene

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2022

reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022
    Thank you for such a great review Darlene. Blessings to you also.
reply by The Mom/DarleneThomson on 24-Jan-2022
    Your mos welcome
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Some sweet memories recalled here and your personal thoughts are endearing and magical, when we are brought back to reality we realise how precious the past is, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2021

reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
    Yes sometimes the is revisted to in our dreams. Thank you Dolly
Comment from karenina
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And this is why you shouldn't eat pizza before bed....


(I have no data to back that up but my grand mom used to say it so it must be true!)

I love dreams.... I used to keep a dream journal. Had I known I'd join a writers site I wouldn't have tossed it!

Karenina



 Comment Written 22-Dec-2021

reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
    Dreams would make good poems or paintings. I think Salvador Dali was a big dreamer. So surreal.
reply by karenina on 22-Dec-2021
    I bet Munch had some wild dreams....
    "The Scream" is pretty out there!
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
    Oh yes! Good call k. Munch had some nightmares for sure.