Cycle of Life
Life continues in a woodland stream.3 total reviews
Comment from Earl Corp
The circle of life is an infinite thing. It's too bad this was just a 5-7-5 or you could have gone further with it. good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2021
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The circle of life is an infinite thing. It's too bad this was just a 5-7-5 or you could have gone further with it. good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2021
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I agree, but I do like the format. One can say much in a few words. Thanks for the read and feedback.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
And in the next clip this trout is on my plate, as you say life goes on and you win some, you lose some, a fine snippet of the the good chain here, glad we are at the top! Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2021
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And in the next clip this trout is on my plate, as you say life goes on and you win some, you lose some, a fine snippet of the the good chain here, glad we are at the top! Love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2021
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I could not agree with you more. Thanks for the read and comments.
Comment from Pantygynt
That is one way of looking at it. On the other hand, there is always an alternative view.
Trout rise to mayflies
One conceals a wicked hook
Life cycle ended
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2021
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That is one way of looking at it. On the other hand, there is always an alternative view.
Trout rise to mayflies
One conceals a wicked hook
Life cycle ended
Comment Written 21-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2021
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Yes, that works nicely. Maybe ended for the trout, but continues for the fisherman and hopefully no shark is in the fisherman's future. Thanks for read and feedback.