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Electric Shock in a FLASH

Charity can be costly

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Comment from Wendy G
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My goodness! He has been taken advantage of in a seriously big way. All your friends seem to be taken advantage of, thinking of Chuck with the tomato thief. I hope Scott shows her the bill, and puts a time limit on her stay. Incredible to make assumptions about and take advantage of people's generosity like Janice has done.
Wendy

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
    Meantime--the woman's car was stolen, so she can't camp out--fortunately, Scott's house is not in walking distance of her job, so she's staying in a nearby cheap motel--otherwise, she'd have wormed her way inside! Scott was the one with the tomato thief.
Comment from Sanku
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Mrs Barr is a cool customer,pushing her unwanted customer onto the good natured friend of yours. And what does he get for it? An inflated bill! He should ask mrs Barr to pay that amount.

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
    Meantime--the woman's car was stolen, so she can't camp out--fortunately, Scott's house is not in walking distance of her job, so she's staying in a nearby cheap motel--otherwise, she'd have wormed her way inside!
Comment from T B Botts
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Sounds like Scott has his own built in charity, he doesn't need to give to any other. Perhaps he should contact Mrs. Barr and invite her to be charitable by picking up the electric bill. I fear that my generosity would have run out long ago, Christmas season or not.
Have a blessed evening.

Tom

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
    Meantime--the woman's car was stolen, so she can't camp out--fortunately, Scott's house is not in walking distance of her job, so she's staying in a nearby cheap motel--otherwise, she'd have wormed her way inside!
Comment from Midi O'Rourke
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I like your flash. You have created an interesting profile of Janice, the redhead. My imagination is piqued about the "odd" things. Hmmm.

I am well acquainted with space heaters. I have one going full tilt when I'm in the shop. Ka-ching!

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
    Meantime--the woman's car was stolen, so she can't camp out--fortunately, Scott's house is not in walking distance of her job, so she's staying in a nearby cheap motel--otherwise, she'd have wormed her way inside!
Comment from Monica Chaddick
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Poor Scott! Ms. Barr doesn't sound like such a great friend. Maybe she should pay the difference in Scott's electric bill since she wanted to get them together in the first place.

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
    Meantime--the woman's car was stolen, so she can't camp out--fortunately, Scott's house is not in walking distance of her job, so she's staying in a nearby cheap motel--otherwise, she'd have wormed her way inside!
Comment from Jay Squires
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OMG, I can't believe she is still with him. Scott is in desperate need of intervention. For his own good. At some point he's got to confront her and tell her he's not going to be her Sugardaddy any longer. Buh-bye, Bitch!

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 Comment Written 21-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
    Meantime--the woman's car was stolen, so she can't camp out--fortunately, Scott's house is not in walking distance of her job, so she's staying in a nearby cheap motel--otherwise, she'd have wormed her way inside!
Comment from lyenochka
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I hope Scott did tell Mrs. Barr to stop sending him homeless people to care for. I think he should have just offered the extension cord and space heater to Mrs. Barr. Those space heaters are super inefficient!

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 Comment Written 21-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
    Meantime--the woman's car was stolen, so she can't camp out--fortunately, Scott's house is not in walking distance of her job, so she's staying in a nearby cheap motel--otherwise, she'd have wormed her way inside!
reply by lyenochka on 21-Jan-2022
    I'm still appalled at that church secretary volunteering Scott! He really should learn how to say NO.