Heavenly Birth
3.5.3 poem7 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3; Heavenly Birth, has the right setup and reminds the readers that before the tree, Santa Claus, red-nosed reindeer, and the animated snowman, there was the birth of the Savior of the world.
This 3-5-3; Heavenly Birth, has the right setup and reminds the readers that before the tree, Santa Claus, red-nosed reindeer, and the animated snowman, there was the birth of the Savior of the world.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2021
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 3-5-3 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. I like the presentation too. Good luck in the contest!
Excellent entry for the 3-5-3 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. I like the presentation too. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 21-Dec-2021
Comment from R R McIntyre
This is good! There's not much you can do with so few syllables, but you've done a really good job capturing the scene. The rhyme is a nice touch, too. It's straightforward and simple and wholesome, with simple and humble language that reflects the humility of the nativity scene.
This is good! There's not much you can do with so few syllables, but you've done a really good job capturing the scene. The rhyme is a nice touch, too. It's straightforward and simple and wholesome, with simple and humble language that reflects the humility of the nativity scene.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2021
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 3-5-3 poem for the contest
with a nice addition of the rhyme,
as well as a theme fanstorians will relate to.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Robert
This is an excellent 3-5-3 poem for the contest
with a nice addition of the rhyme,
as well as a theme fanstorians will relate to.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 20-Dec-2021
Comment from pookietoo
A lovely 353 poem and photo to go with it. I love the Christmas season. I wish you a lot of luck in the contest. Happy holidays to you and your family. Best wishes.
A lovely 353 poem and photo to go with it. I love the Christmas season. I wish you a lot of luck in the contest. Happy holidays to you and your family. Best wishes.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2021
Comment from RodG
The Christmas theme is rampant in this contest, but your poem certainly summarizes Christ's birth in a charming way and you employed rhymes, too. Good luck in the contest. Rod
The Christmas theme is rampant in this contest, but your poem certainly summarizes Christ's birth in a charming way and you employed rhymes, too. Good luck in the contest. Rod
Comment Written 20-Dec-2021
Comment from TPAC
I like the ingredients used for this particular stir, feeling the arrangement of them lacks greatest impact, suggesting as a problem resolution.
Heavenly
A birth on the earth
At Christmas. All stated in my given viewpoint.
I like the ingredients used for this particular stir, feeling the arrangement of them lacks greatest impact, suggesting as a problem resolution.
Heavenly
A birth on the earth
At Christmas. All stated in my given viewpoint.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2021