Comment from Kit Nongkhlaw

Excellent

It is a wonderful love song. The way you put simple words to make sublime meaning is amazing. You are a talented poet with a magic weave to entertain and teach the readers. Thank you and all the very best in the contest, Kit.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021

Thanks

reply by Kit Nongkhlaw on 23-Dec-2021

You are welcome

reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021

:)

Comment from jenintorre

Excellent

A very well rhymed poem and good entry for the competition. Just one thing. I spotted a typo four lines from the end that you need to correct ... aare(are).
Good luck and best wishes. Jen.

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021

Thanks

Comment from GollyGreen32

Excellent

Hi! I enjoyed your poem. I liked that referred to Jesus in the last line of the poem. It made a great impact. Three things: I don't know if that 8 is supposed to be in after the first line, there is another b in front of the word "beauties" in the 9th line, and there is another a in front of the word "are" in the 18th line. Great job on this poem!

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021

Thanks.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A poem about all the things in life you love and you made me smile when you said pizza and stroganoff! Ha ha ha two things I never eat but you obviously love. Glad you mention the flowers and friends too, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021

Thanks.

Comment from duchessofdrumborg

Exceptional

' I Love Many Things ' , is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. It was a privilege to both read and review this talented poet's work. To me this is definitely a six. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021

Thanks!

Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

You need to change the fonts so the words are all the same style and colour. However this simple but sweet poem is really lovely and I hope it does well in the competition kindest regards and Festive wishes love Meia x

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021

Thanks.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

That's a great list of things you love. I like your third stanza best and I wonder if the poem wouldn't have more impact if you put that one at the end? The foods and the snow of the later stanzas are nice but not as strong. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2021

Thank you!

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

This life is wonderful.
I Love Many Things


Excellent entry for the Things You Love Contest. You expressed what you like well. I think it's important to be thankful for what we love. Well done. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2021

Thank you.

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

I enjoyed reading this verse that is so rosie, full of faith, also, an enjoyable read. Your rhymes were well chose and made the poem flow. Well done.

Melissa

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2021

Thanks a lot.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

There's no doubt what you love, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading your poem. I like the rhymes and the many examples of things you love. Your words have a smooth flow, I like the faith parts, and the nature parts, but who could resist fudge.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2021

Thanks very much and happy holidays.