Snow Storm: Victim Recovery
Constabulary Searches for the Missing4 total reviews
Comment from lauralumummu
Your story was well written and interesting to read. You are a terrific writer. The descriptions are vivid and pull the reader in. This is a good entry for the contest. I only wish the font was a little bigger the advanced editor has options the regular font is only a ten and too small to read easily. All the best, Laura.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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Your story was well written and interesting to read. You are a terrific writer. The descriptions are vivid and pull the reader in. This is a good entry for the contest. I only wish the font was a little bigger the advanced editor has options the regular font is only a ten and too small to read easily. All the best, Laura.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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Lady Laura, you are too kind, and I truly appreciate your time to note your comments on this bit of whimsy. I'll check the font size, thank you for calling that to my attention.
Live long and write well,
Fantasist
Comment from Annmuma
An upsetting story and an interesting take on the contest. It is well written and I saw spag at all. The notes at the end were almost superfluous after reading the story --- but I'm glad they are there. Good luck in the contest. ann
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2021
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An upsetting story and an interesting take on the contest. It is well written and I saw spag at all. The notes at the end were almost superfluous after reading the story --- but I'm glad they are there. Good luck in the contest. ann
Comment Written 21-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2021
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Thank you. There are too many such remote highways. The danger is always there in those conditions.
Comment from RodG
I remember only too well the first snows that hit the Sierra Nevada's and motorists driving between Sacramento and Reno. Your story is realistic describing those who spin out of control as well as some civilians who attempt to walk through blizzards and get lost. I especially like your use of dialog between Freeman and Denman. Rod
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I remember only too well the first snows that hit the Sierra Nevada's and motorists driving between Sacramento and Reno. Your story is realistic describing those who spin out of control as well as some civilians who attempt to walk through blizzards and get lost. I especially like your use of dialog between Freeman and Denman. Rod
Comment Written 20-Dec-2021
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of this work reminisces a disaster occasioned by snowfall.
The work highlights several missing persons; with few of them trapped in their cars and several of them thawed away by the gliding snowflakes. And worst of all, the worst is yet to come.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of corroborating anecdotes.
Excellent work. Bravo.
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The objective correlative of this work reminisces a disaster occasioned by snowfall.
The work highlights several missing persons; with few of them trapped in their cars and several of them thawed away by the gliding snowflakes. And worst of all, the worst is yet to come.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of corroborating anecdotes.
Excellent work. Bravo.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2021
