Ghosts are Rewarded
Ghost Story contest entry.5 total reviews
Comment from writer723
I really enjoyed reading your very entertaining story. It had all of the elements that a great ghost story needs. It was, to me, spooky yet humorous and engaging from beginning to end. Your writing talent is evident in the way your words flow so smoothly. Congratulations on the win!
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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I really enjoyed reading your very entertaining story. It had all of the elements that a great ghost story needs. It was, to me, spooky yet humorous and engaging from beginning to end. Your writing talent is evident in the way your words flow so smoothly. Congratulations on the win!
Comment Written 27-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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Thank you! Thanks for congratulating me it is appreciated! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Comment from Mary Shifman
Well, I'm glad I'm safe. I've always believed in ghosts and I've never made fun of them! This is an interesting story and flows well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2021
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Well, I'm glad I'm safe. I've always believed in ghosts and I've never made fun of them! This is an interesting story and flows well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2021
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Thank you!
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You're welcome.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Vivid! Creepy indeed.
Stragers' =>STRANGERS' blood spurts out
Children were screaming. It looked like [it's=>A] movie set
They thought that this is for making fun of the deceased and not taking THEM seriously. NOT SURE WHAT YOU MEAN--who's making fun of whom?
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YOU FORGOT TO TWEAK THIS PART AND THE TYPO ABOVE.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2021
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Vivid! Creepy indeed.
Stragers' =>STRANGERS' blood spurts out
Children were screaming. It looked like [it's=>A] movie set
They thought that this is for making fun of the deceased and not taking THEM seriously. NOT SURE WHAT YOU MEAN--who's making fun of whom?
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YOU FORGOT TO TWEAK THIS PART AND THE TYPO ABOVE.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2021
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Thank you! I have fixed the mistakes. Does it read better?
Comment from Earl Corp
You have to many "o"s in look. Did you mean looked like? Did you mean taking instead of taken? Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2021
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You have to many "o"s in look. Did you mean looked like? Did you mean taking instead of taken? Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2021
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Thank you for your help. I have fixed the mistakes. Is it better now for a five stars rating? Please check!
Comment from G.M. Dandridge
Needs a bit of work. Maybe background story on how the ghost appeared & their transition from Casper to Beetlejuice. Needs a little more "writer's passion", we should love the stories we tell. Just my thoughts.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2021
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Needs a bit of work. Maybe background story on how the ghost appeared & their transition from Casper to Beetlejuice. Needs a little more "writer's passion", we should love the stories we tell. Just my thoughts.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2021
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Okay!