Lord of the Manor
Fiction Ancestral Discovery8 total reviews
Comment from writer723
I really enjoyed reading your story. You have such a wonderful way with words and are quite adept at expressing yourself. I found this writing to be very interesting. It held my attention throughout. Your vivid descriptions made it easy for me to visualize the scenario you were writing about. Your story really kept me in suspense. Excellent job!
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2022
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I really enjoyed reading your story. You have such a wonderful way with words and are quite adept at expressing yourself. I found this writing to be very interesting. It held my attention throughout. Your vivid descriptions made it easy for me to visualize the scenario you were writing about. Your story really kept me in suspense. Excellent job!
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2022
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Superb review - much appreciated- & apologies for this tardy review Zanya
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Wow nice for the Ancestral Discovery writing prompt! Best wishes in the contest;-)
Excellent story my friend and the storyline was very captivating and held my attention throughout the piece;-)
Thank you for sharing and may God bless you and your family this Christmas!
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
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Wow nice for the Ancestral Discovery writing prompt! Best wishes in the contest;-)
Excellent story my friend and the storyline was very captivating and held my attention throughout the piece;-)
Thank you for sharing and may God bless you and your family this Christmas!
Comment Written 24-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
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Great review - zanya
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;-)
Comment from royowen
I'm happy Harry was simply happy with his life as it is, I mean I guess curiosity to find our roots may be an interesting project, discovering Skeletons and ghosts may be fun, but does it really matter? I think not. Beautifully written, good luck and merry Christmas, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
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I'm happy Harry was simply happy with his life as it is, I mean I guess curiosity to find our roots may be an interesting project, discovering Skeletons and ghosts may be fun, but does it really matter? I think not. Beautifully written, good luck and merry Christmas, blessings Roy
Comment Written 23-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
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Great reveiw zanya
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Bless you
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. Your story is well conceived. I had no idea there was a dream involved--everything seemed so real. You are right about everyone finding out about their ancestors. I imagine those companies that make those kits are rolling in the dough. You did a great job characterizing Harry and Edward. They, too, seemed real.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
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I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. Your story is well conceived. I had no idea there was a dream involved--everything seemed so real. You are right about everyone finding out about their ancestors. I imagine those companies that make those kits are rolling in the dough. You did a great job characterizing Harry and Edward. They, too, seemed real.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 21-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
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Great reveiw zanya
Comment from Mary Shifman
I enjoyed your story. So apparently Harry was dreaming about the results of a test he hadn't yet taken. I don't know how much stock I put in them, really. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
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I enjoyed your story. So apparently Harry was dreaming about the results of a test he hadn't yet taken. I don't know how much stock I put in them, really. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
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You are welcome.
Comment from Earl Corp
I don't know what the word count was for the contest but almost seems like the story cut off jus before the end. I think it is spelled Aye instead of Ay. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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I don't know what the word count was for the contest but almost seems like the story cut off jus before the end. I think it is spelled Aye instead of Ay. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Wendy G
A well-written story and you kept my interest throughout. The characters seemed realistic and authentic, and the dialogue added a nice touch. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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A well-written story and you kept my interest throughout. The characters seemed realistic and authentic, and the dialogue added a nice touch. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 19-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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Great reveiw zanya
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
This makes for an great novel. And you paint a vivid picture of mid evil times, and it's very unique lineage & traditions. Which shows you have skills. Keep writing.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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This makes for an great novel. And you paint a vivid picture of mid evil times, and it's very unique lineage & traditions. Which shows you have skills. Keep writing.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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Great review zanya