Lost
Lost - Contest Entry12 total reviews
Comment from Paul McFarland
A rare six stars from me. Might have something to do with the fact that my mother suffered with Alzheimer's disease. The story flows nicely, and you have ended it with a master stroke.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2021
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A rare six stars from me. Might have something to do with the fact that my mother suffered with Alzheimer's disease. The story flows nicely, and you have ended it with a master stroke.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2021
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Thank you, so much! My husband had it too. Such a difficult disease.
Comment from lancellot
A sad and good flash. In this case the lost has another meaning. A loss in the mental sense. I like these different takes on the word. I think this story will appeal to many voters. It is a theme that FanStory's demographic can relate too. And your ending is a warm one.
Well done and good luck.
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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2021
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A sad and good flash. In this case the lost has another meaning. A loss in the mental sense. I like these different takes on the word. I think this story will appeal to many voters. It is a theme that FanStory's demographic can relate too. And your ending is a warm one.
Well done and good luck.
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Comment Written 18-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2021
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Thank you!
