Brian's book of poem's
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Comment from Heidixoxo
Hello Brian S. Watson,
I can truly relate to you on the whole sleep issues 100%. It can/is a difficult thing to adjust to and navigate. Great job with your expressions. Thank you for sharing with us all. Best of luck to you....
Heidixoxo
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Hello Brian S. Watson,
I can truly relate to you on the whole sleep issues 100%. It can/is a difficult thing to adjust to and navigate. Great job with your expressions. Thank you for sharing with us all. Best of luck to you....
Heidixoxo
Comment Written 16-Dec-2021
Comment from Paul McFarland
You are describing a problem that many of us have. I would like you to present this poem in stanzas. The way it is, it reads like prose. I think you could have a nice piece here.
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You are describing a problem that many of us have. I would like you to present this poem in stanzas. The way it is, it reads like prose. I think you could have a nice piece here.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2021
