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Christmas Brekky6 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Christmas poetry contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation and imagery. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
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Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Christmas poetry contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation and imagery. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 17-Dec-2021
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and good presentation.
-That is quite a spread.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Effective imagery describes
a special Christmas tradition.
-The closing line is very good
and takes on special meaning
because of Christmas.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2021
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-Nice image and good presentation.
-That is quite a spread.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Effective imagery describes
a special Christmas tradition.
-The closing line is very good
and takes on special meaning
because of Christmas.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2021
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Thanks for your review Pam. Glad you saw the meaning of the last line.
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You are very welcome, and thanks for sharing your comment.
Comment from Paul McFarland
This is a very good five-eight-five poem. Christmas Down Under looks like a great meal. Up in the northern hemisphere we have to eat inside. I don't know what the judges are going to say about the eight syllables.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2021
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This is a very good five-eight-five poem. Christmas Down Under looks like a great meal. Up in the northern hemisphere we have to eat inside. I don't know what the judges are going to say about the eight syllables.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2021
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Thanks for your review and correction. Not sure how I missed that.
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
I gave you four stars, cause although your 7 seven syllable did coincide, I felt that you started reaching...and although you found something, it was not creative art. But you are still hot! Keep Writing.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2021
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I gave you four stars, cause although your 7 seven syllable did coincide, I felt that you started reaching...and although you found something, it was not creative art. But you are still hot! Keep Writing.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2021
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from Heidixoxo
Hello my friend,
This is a very good 5-7-5 entry for the upcoming contest. This is captivating and I really like the artwork choice. Good luck to you....
Heidixoxo
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2021
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Hello my friend,
This is a very good 5-7-5 entry for the upcoming contest. This is captivating and I really like the artwork choice. Good luck to you....
Heidixoxo
Comment Written 16-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2021
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Thanks for a very positive review.
Comment from LisaMay
Oh my gosh, how utterly yummy. That spread looks like enough food for various kings, queens, princes and princesses - all day eating under summer skies.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2021
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Oh my gosh, how utterly yummy. That spread looks like enough food for various kings, queens, princes and princesses - all day eating under summer skies.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2021
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Thanks Lisa. I'm sure you remember a typical Aussie Christmas with enough food to last right into the New Year.
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Sure do. Good times.
