Christmas Eve Prayer Answered
Santa came and enjoyed his treat.2 total reviews
Comment from SimianSavant
Ooof! In such a short piece you should not have typos! It should be Santa, not Santa's. An easy fix. Otherwise looks good. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Ooof! In such a short piece you should not have typos! It should be Santa, not Santa's. An easy fix. Otherwise looks good. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 16-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Thanks, don't know what I was thinking. I have edited.
Comment from LisaMay
It's thirsty work being Santa, delivering all the gifts, so it is nice to see the generosity of leaving a snack for him.
Santa's does not need the apostrophe and last s - it is just Santa
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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It's thirsty work being Santa, delivering all the gifts, so it is nice to see the generosity of leaving a snack for him.
Santa's does not need the apostrophe and last s - it is just Santa
Comment Written 16-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Thanks, don't know what I was thinking. I have edited.
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